here, i give your some personal points,小牛人 (A) Like the one reputed to live in Loch Ness, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster.” "Like" is used to compare inhabitants with a monster.If inhabitants were lived in Loch Ness, they would be called "monster" instead of human beings. "also" does not express a clear meaning here. (B) Inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster” similar to the one reputed to live in Loch Ness, which, like Lake Champlain, is an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river. "like construction" is used to compare Lake Champlain with Loch Ness . All the elements here are followed by their modifiers. (C) Inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster” similar to Loch Ness’s, which, like Lake Champlain, is an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river. Loch Ness's equals Loch Ness's Monster. Here it rediculously point that the Monster is like a Lake. (D) Like Loch Ness’ reputed monster, inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster.” Errors here are the same as those in Choice A. (E) Similar to that reputed to live in Loch Ness, inhabitants of the area around Lake Champlain, also an inland lake connected to the ocean by a river, claim sightings of a long and narrow “sea monster.” Inhabitant can be similar to the one that is living in Loch Ness. It's unclear what does "also" mean here. Inhabitant can be similar to the one that is living in Loch Ness. It's unclear what does "also" mean here. Inhabitant can be similar to the one that is living in Loch Ness. It's unclear what does "also" mean here.
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