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发表于 2013-7-1 14:38:20 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Governments and companies should share their scientific discoveries with others

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When it comes to the question that whether governments andcompanies should share their scientific discoveries with others, some thinkyes, and the others answer no. If you ask me, I would say 'It depends.',because I think the answer should not be simply white or black, and manyfactors should be considered in this question.
On one hand, I would raise the factor of security. If somediscoveries by governments are quite security sensitive, for sure, thesediscoveries should be considered more seriously before shared with companies,or even rejected to be shares. Just image what would be happened if thesediscoveries have been used by terrorist, who could somehow get suchtechnologies from companies since it's reasonable to think that the companiesare less strict than governments to keep sensitive technologies. Therefore, thesecurity factor should be considered before making the decision.
On the other hand, If there is no such security issue,governments could consider to share scientific discoveries with companies, andthe reason can be obviously seen. By sharing, both sides, governments andcompanies could be benefited. For companies, the new discoveries could increasetheir competitive strength in the world market, and for government, the newdiscoveries could provide more service for their people. Therefore thissituation is double win.
In conclusion, both sides, positive and negative, should beconsidered when we decide whether governments and companies should share theirscientific discoveries. If the sharing could much increase the competence oftheir economic, why the governments do not it? But if there is high risk toshare some technologies, the governments should be more cautious.

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-2 11:56:40 | 只看该作者
感觉写的不好, 今天换个思路又重写一篇

With fast development of technology in 21th century, many new scientific discoveries have been found by governments and companies. But a dilemma comes up with this fast development, whether the new discoveries should be shared between governments and companies. Some think that the government should not share its new discoveries with any company and vice versa, and the others believe that the sharing is quite vital for the country. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that the sharing of scientific discoveries between governments and companies would be quite beneficial or even imperative for both of them.

In the first place, from the perspective of resource utilization, I think the sharing is quite efficient in many ways. For example, when the government gets some new scientific discoveries and shares them with the company, then the company doesn't need to allocate many resources such as capital or human to redevelop the technology which is already existed. And from another side, if the company gets some new discoveries which could be beneficial for the whole country, then the strategy of sharing will much decrease the time needed for the government to improve the quality of life in its country. Therefore, from the better utilization of time, capital and even human resource, I believe the sharing is excellent strategy for the country.

In the second place, from the perspective of competitiveness, I believe the sharing could be beneficial not only for the government and for the company. For the government, if it could take new technologies about medicine and military for granted, the competitiveness would be increased in high speed. And on the other side, if the company could get the technology support from its government, it would be advantaged in the global market. Just image what would happen when we compare two countries, one takes sharing strategy and the other does not. I would not be surprised that the competitiveness of the former is much stronger than the latter in many respects.

Admittedly, the sharing strategy could have some issues such as security and authority. But I belevie that many ways could be taken to reduce these risks, and that the positive is weight more than the negative. Thus from what have been discussed, we may safely draw the conclusion that the governments and companies should share their scientific discoveries with others.
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