哪一种表达方式更加正确

it is their sensitive response to human circumstance that accounts for the persistence of certain universal ideas.

it is their sensitive response  that accounts for the persistence of certain universal ideas to human circumstance.

我认为第二个更好.

it is their sensitive response  that accounts for the persistence of certain universal ideas to human circumstance.

谢谢，同感。不过一篇gre阅读上用的是第一种。。。

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