46. To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance.
(A)To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate
(B)For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris was her home
(C)Josephine Baker made Paris her home long before to be an expatriate was fashionable
(D)Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine Baker made Paris her home
(E)Long before it was fashionable being an expatriate, Paris was home to Josephine Baker
OG中，对A.B的错误有这两条：
A. To Josephine Baker ... her is redundant and awkward;对这种to在句首的总是没弄明白，怎么错了呢
BFor Josephine Baker ... her is redundant and awkward;
maybe: A. Paris was Josephine Baker's home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, ... B. Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris was Josephine Baker's home, ... 上面的比較concise, 可是有點改了原意, 原意是Josephine Baker made Paris her home, 上面的有點像說author's or other people's的看法 - Paris was Josephine Baker's home C&D沒有這個問題&比較concise To/For Josephine Baker, Paris was her home...vs. Josephine Baker made Paris her home the former expresses the idea in a roundabout way; the latter is more straight forward.
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