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Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several
autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native Denmark.
(A) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well
as several autobiographies, which remained
(B) Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain
(C) Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
(D) Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as
several autobiographies, which remained
(E) Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several
autobiographies, remain prep笔记对排除A的理由之一：while在句中表达的是“在…期间，当…时候”的意思，不符合逻辑。 我想请问一下，while在句中应该也能表达转折的含义，用在这里是否恰当。 比如还有一题：
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Whereas the use of synthetic fertilizers has greatly expanded agricultural productivity in many parts of the world, an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water
pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers may accelerate soil structure deterioration and soil erosion.
(A) an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
(B) an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, and if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, it
(C) if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they
(D) the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution
(E) the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, while their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
根据笔记，D的错误在于"if substituted..., this substitution..."的表达方式啰嗦不简洁；while表达了转折的含义，而原句中由and连接并列的句子，并没有此含义”。我记得，whereas后面跟的对象，主从句需要一致，那么the use of...应当和usage保持一致，而不是increase。 的表达方式啰嗦不简洁；while表达了转折的含义，而原句中由and连接并列的句子，并没有此含义”。我记得，whereas后面跟的对象，主从句需要一致，那么the use of...应当和usage保持一致，而不是increase。请指教 |
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