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She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.

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楼主
发表于 2007-11-15 09:38:00 | 只看该作者

请教prep1-160 没有人问过

160.  (33567-!-item-!-188;#058&006988)

 

She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.

 

(A) She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.

(B) She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.

(C) As an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, Nannie Helen Burroughs was one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.

(D) As an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.

(E) Being an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.

正确答案没问题,但是B错在哪呢?

prep里说
                
and…also was
不合逻辑
                     

请问为什么呢?
                    

沙发
发表于 2007-11-15 10:29:00 | 只看该作者

the structure of B is:

She was an N1, a N2, and a N3, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one .........

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-15 10:53:00 | 只看该作者

She was an N1, a N2, and a N3, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one .........

不好意思
            
我不太懂你的意思

She was an N1, a N2, and a N3 , and Nannie Burroughs also was…


            
,and
连接两个完整子句有什不对吗?

可以麻烦你说清楚一点吗?

谢谢指教

地板
发表于 2007-11-15 11:21:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用qwedcxzas在2007-11-15 10:53:00的发言:

She was an N1, a N2, and a N3, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one .........

不好意思
   
我不太懂你的意思

She was an N1, a N2, and a N3 , and Nannie Burroughs also was…


   
,and
连接两个完整子句有什不对吗?

可以麻烦你说清楚一点吗?

谢谢指教

Nannie Helen Bruuoughs
            She was an N1, a N2, and a N3, and
            she
            Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one .........

这样比较符合锣辑吧。

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-15 12:46:00 | 只看该作者

先谢谢你的回复

我也认为先出现人名再用she比较合乎逻辑

所以B在这里没有语法上的错误吗?

我以为prep上面写的and…also was 是造成他语法上的错误

但是不晓得为什么 

google了一下
发现also was还满常出现的

google了一下
发现also was还满常出现的

请再指点一下  谢谢


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6#
发表于 2007-11-15 21:48:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用qwedcxzas在2007-11-15 12:46:00的发言:

先谢谢你的回复

我也认为先出现人名再用she比较合乎逻辑

所以B在这里没有语法上的错误吗?

那个句首的 SHE 指代什么呢? GMAT SC 的趋势好像更注重锣辑了。

7#
发表于 2007-11-15 21:56:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用qwedcxzas在2007-11-15 12:46:00的发言:

我以为prep上面写的and…also was 是造成他语法上的错误

但是不晓得为什么 

google了一下
发现also was还满常出现的

google了一下
发现also was还满常出现的

google了一下
发现also was还满常出现的

请再指点一下  谢谢


偶猜是他们(PREP) 没写清楚.  

She was N1, N2 and N3...., and  Nannie H.B also was N4. 是错的。

应该是 Nannie H.B was N1, N2, N3 and N4.

Personal opinion

8#
发表于 2007-11-15 22:27:00 | 只看该作者

代词优先指代主句的中心词,但由and连接的两个分句是并列的,所以前面的she没有指代对象,转变原句意思。

————————个人意见

9#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-16 08:51:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢回复

好像是我太钻牛角尖了

总而言之  谢谢啦

10#
发表于 2007-11-16 13:24:00 | 只看该作者

表达错误!不是所有都是纯的“语法”错误!

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