初次發文作文求拍～

言晞藻 · 发表于 2008-7-25 22:04:00

各位好，因距考試日期僅剩一個多月......在下又對自己的作文十分沒有信心.......
厚著臉皮po上來，煩請版上諸位大人批評指教（我的心臟很堅強，就算是狠批也無所謂）
先感謝各位的幫忙了（合掌）

＊ Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money？ Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Which do I think is the best way to spending the money of my school receives? It is believed that inviting more good teachers to teach in the school is the most important. However, I think that this is not only the reason that the way to spend this money. There are other reasons presented as follow.

First, it is in terms of providing more scholarship than before that help to students who come from the poor family. For example, one of my friends is the one who has to do a lot of part-time jobs hardly to earn her tuition fee and the cost of daily life, which makes her has to stay out all night to complete the homework and can not to do her best in the class. Because the criterion of applying scholarship is too high for her to apply, she must work hard to support her life. On the contrary, if there are more scholarship for student, she can have a better life to study.

Second, it is in terms of donating some part of money to the mission like churches or Red Cross that aid people who need help. Moreover, not only can the function of school to be a place to educate the student in the campus, but also to teach them the moral to help other people who surround us. As a result, donating money to the mission to aid some people who need help is a good example for students. On the other hand, it can encourage students to do more things to benefit other poor one around us, giving them the virtue to help others.

Third, it is in terms of investing a part of money to stock market or something else that make more money for school to use it many ways. Therefore, not only can renew a variety of service and appliances in the school to give student a better learning environment, but also assist more people of the whole society. In fact, there indeed nothing can do if we don’t have any money. Nevertheless, even the school gets a lot of money from investigation, there still need a clear and effective management to promise that the money can totally use to benefit the whole campus and the ones in the society who need.

To sum up, I definitely think that there are many reasons that we spend money which the school received, among them allowing more scholarships for poor students, donating money to the mission and investing to make more money to help other people.

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