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By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

is the answer B? if B is right, let me try to explain

A   their is wrong, the correct pronoun ought to be its.

C    to-- from and their  are both wrong.

D   the secentence is disordered.

E  have two errors:to---from  and  the country’s $21

答案是E。

首先，用到their的错，故A/C错；其次，B/C中的which指代不明，不知是指代country,还是share,还是market。所以选E，虽然E中的 the country’s $21billion book market不是很好。

不知这个理解可对？

发现了ETS改写的原文NY times，觉得ETS的改法不太顺口，虽然更正式 （B正确,别的选项更错）

By merging its Bantam Doubleday Dell division with Advance Publications' Random House, Bertelsmann will increase to 10 percent from nearly 6 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the United States, which ranges from Bibles to mass-market paperbacks.

原文地址如下

http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9804E2DA1038F937A15750C0A96E958260&n=Top/Reference/Times%20Topics/Subjects/B/Books%20and%20Literature

agree with kevintown.

The correct answer should be B.