Studies show that young people with higher-than-average blood pressure and their families have a history of high blood pressure are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition. A. and their families have a history of high blood pressure B. whose families have a history of high blood pressure C. and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family D. whose families have a history of high blood pressure running in them E. with a history of high blood pressure running in their family
搜了前辈们的讨论，即使我承认whoseB 在这里跳跃修饰，我还是对C有疑问。 C:Studies show that young people 【withhigher-than-average blood pressure and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family】 are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition. 就是说，我认为and a history是和with的blood pressure平行的，请问这样的话，这句话有什么问题呢？ 谢谢！
这题我也思考了很久, 正好大家可以一起讨论下. C)Studies show that young people with higher-than-average blood pressure and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.
我觉得blood pressure跟a history of high blood pressure [that] runs in the family的平行应该没有问题, 两个都是名词. 但是我觉得这个"the family"似乎有问题. 前面是"young people", 后面应该对应的用复数"families."
------------- 恩，silent你说了我也困惑了 我觉得你对that的解释很对 但是这个the family我是这样看的 以前做到过one of the three novels written by a black America 或者说，我说birds with a four-room heart要比birds with four-room hearts清楚，因为后者搞不清到底是怎么分布的。（曼哈顿看的） 所以，我以为，这样运用过来，the family没有什么问题
不过...that runs...是否逻辑不对？ 我实在不清楚run的用法 不敢判断 open to discuss
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