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楼主
发表于 2007-9-8 00:43:00 | 只看该作者

[讨论]11OG 36

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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-8 00:46:00 | 只看该作者
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板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-8 00:51:00 | 只看该作者


    

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             What was as remarkable as the development of
the compact disc
has been the use of the new
technology to revitalize
in
better sound than was ever before possible
some of the classic recorded performances of the pre-LP era


    

(A)  What was as remarkable as the development of
the compact disc


    

(B)  The thing that was as remarkable as
developing the compact disc


    

(C)  No less remarkable than the development of
the compact disc


    

(D)  Developing the compact disc has been none the
less remarkable than


    

(E)  Development of the compact disc has been no
less remarkable as


    

Parallelism + Rhetorical
construction


    

This
sentence compares the development of the compact disc with the use 0fthe new
technology


    

these
two phrases must use parallel grammatical structures to make the comparison
clear


    

Unnecessary
words disrupt the parallelism and clutter the meaning
they must be omittedThe


    

correct
idiom for comparison must be used


    

A  What was is awkward and unnecessaryconstruction uses a verb tense that does not agree
with has been


    

B  The thing that was is wordy and unnecessary,
and it introduces a verb tense that does not agree with has been


    

C  CorrectNo less remarkable thans the clearestmost concise and idiomatically correct wav for this sentence
to introduce the comparison between the development and the use


    

D  Developing is not parallel to the usenonetheless followed by than is not a correct idiom
for comparison


    

E  Without its articledevelopment is not parallel to the useno less...as is not a correct idiom


    

for
comparison


    

The correct answer is C



我觉得这个题目很诡异, 包括平行结构对称,主句完整,时态,习惯用法。
主句不完整(即主语谓语缺省)应该是很大一宗罪, C没有主语, 怎么还是正确的? 大家谈谈做这题的时候是怎么排除优选的好么?
地板
发表于 2007-9-8 14:03:00 | 只看该作者
What was as remarkable as the development of the compact disc
                has been the use of the new technology to revitalize
,in better sound than was ever before possible,some of the classic recorded performances of the pre-LP era

(A)  What was
                    
as remarkable as the development of the compact disc 时态错

(B)  The thing that was as remarkable as developing the compact disc 时态错

(C)  No less remarkable than the development of the compact disc 倒装:the development of the compact disc has been no less remarkable than the use of the new technology -> 平行对称 n. of n.

(D)  Developing the compact disc has been none the less remarkable than  无此搭配

(E)  Development of the compact disc has been no less remarkable as  无此搭配

A/B错,时态不对
建议LZ去看菜鸟语法手册。
5#
发表于 2007-9-8 15:22:00 | 只看该作者
平行:development of 与use of  BD错
时态:不应该用过去时。AB错
省略:has been不能出现两次 DE错
还有:no less than固定搭配 DE错
楼主认为的主语缺少是不对的,因为此句是倒装句,主语在后面,the use of the new
technology

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-8 15:23:52编辑过]
6#
发表于 2009-7-23 16:40:00 | 只看该作者
我也有问题~ so as to不是可以做目的的么
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