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Before I took the TOEFL test, I spent more than a month preparing it and it was really a tough time for me. During this period, I studied each session strenuously in order to get a decent score to meet the language proficiency requirement. Sometimes I was so exhausted that I almost gave up. It was Tony- nd of mine who always shares the real feeling with me and helps me get through the hardship. Since he has TOEFL experience, he tutored me how to prepare it and gave me the courage, such as correcting my essay and practicing English-speaking with me. However, some of my friends with humor did nothing but kept joking. They continued to be humorous, chat with me or play tricks on me. As far as I see, I prefer friends who open their heart to me than humor friends.

First and foremost, a person who always shares the true feeling to others would be absolutely helpful to one's friends. Like what I presented above about my own experience, Tony is the one who shared his feeling and assisted for me tremendously. Without his assistance, I might stop to play with other humor friends. Instead, I would suffer from the TOEFL test by now and waste a lot of time and money. Thanks to such kind of friend who gives me the incentive and tells me his real feeling, I could be confident to face the test and conquer it.

The second reason why I choose the latter kind of person is that they are more likely sincere to you. Everyone needs some true friends who can share his or her feelings which means precious experience because we inevitably have some trouble or sadness due to the intensive pressure from job or school work. We do not have to worry about what we said is exposed while we tell them true thoughts. When we sob our hardships to them, they might listen carefully and try to ease our sorrowful emotions. When we share our happiness or success with them, they are likely to give us great congratulation and enjoy the delight with us. They are precious treasures for us and we should be satisfied if we have such kind of friends. Only the friends like this deserve to be credited as good friends.

In a final analysis, friends who share their genuine feelings are more helpful and sincere. Thus, making friends with them would be beneficial for both our physical and mental growth. Therefore, I would definitely desire this kind of friends.

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