folks, an story from Yale SOM

loafer · 发表于 2008-1-23 08:02:00

http://mba.yale.edu/news_events/CMS/Articles/6264.shtml

It's inspiring.

stq · 发表于 2008-1-23 12:40:00

有吗？

觉得肯定是高人指点过的，写了份NB的Essay.....

其实如果你把那些乱七八糟的修饰词去掉，真没觉得他有achieve了点啥。。Yale招他多半是为了Diversification 吧？

慕容楠生 · 发表于 2008-1-23 12:47:00

一个有感情的人是难得的。

任何活动，总有用“自揭痛处”的方法让观众感动的。

qianrene · 发表于 2008-1-23 12:48:00

好多人都会做菜啊，而且肯定比这个貌似韩国人的做得好吃^-^

stq · 发表于 2008-1-23 12:53:00

以下是引用慕容楠生在2008-1-23 12:47:00的发言：

一个有感情的人是难得的。

任何活动，总有用“自揭痛处”的方法让观众感动的。

说白了就是洒狗血啊。。

从一开始说那些啥靠烧菜和父亲沟通就开始撒。。。。一大篇撒下来，虽然真实内容没多少，但光这点狗血就能把adcom的人给砸晕了。。

iammad · 发表于 2008-1-23 13:11:00

That's not his application essay...I think

Just a story about himself... Don't be misguided...

My best guest is, Yale asked several students from different backgrounds to write some stories about themselves, and put them in the students' profile section, as a marketing tool...

stq · 发表于 2008-1-23 13:21:00

除了最后那一小段，其他的从结构到转折，每段想表达的意思，很明显是Essay里personal statement上直接搬来的。

oliviafuwei · 发表于 2008-1-23 18:44:00

允许我臭屁一下。这哥们儿的写作水平不如我

不过故事的卖点选的不错拉

loafer · 发表于 2008-1-23 23:31:00

ha, a heated discussion.

Sorry for the confusion. This is not an application essay. It's a personal story.

The reason I posted it here is because This guy's background doesn't rock at all as many just said, but he got into Yale. It may be for the diversification purpose. However, I would emphasize how this guy differentiated himself and wrote a very coherent and personal story.

Whitney · 发表于 2008-1-23 23:36:00

"Tuo (2)?"

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