88. The recent surge in the number of airplane flights has clogged the nation's air-traffic control system, to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts fears among some officials that safety is being compromised. (A) to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts (B) leading to 55 percent more delay at airports and prompting . (C) to lead to a 55 percent increase in delay at airports and prompt (D) to lead to an increase of 55 percent in delays at airports, and prompted (E) leading to a 55 percent increase in delays at airports and prompting Parallelism + Diction The intent of the sentence is to show two effects of the surge in flights. These effects should be stated in parallel ways, instead of the construction to lead ... and prompts ... used in the original sentence. Using participial phrases introduced by leading and prompting solves this problem. The phrase 55 percent more delays is not as clear as the phrase a 55 percent increase in delays. A To lead and prompts are not parallel; 55 percent more delays is not clear B 55 percent more delay is unclear C To lead and prompt are not parallel; the meaning of increase in delay is not clear D A participial phrase introduced by leading is preferable to the unclear infinitive phrase to lead to; an increase of 55 percent in delays is awkward and wordy EE Correct. Leading and prompting are parallel in this sentence; the phrase a 55 percent increase in delays is clear .. _ The correct answer is E. 请问C选项怎么错了??prompt前省略to很正常啊~~答案说increase in delay不清楚,可是他的结构跟位置和E选项完全一样,C与E不同的地方就是平行结构的用法不一样~~请大家指教!欢迎讨论!:) |