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Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea that book is important meanwhile others believe that experience is more imperative. From my point of view, it is more advisable to choose book rather than experience. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for which book is important is that read book can save us a lot of time. It means it take us a short time to read a book. Since the time we have saved can do much a lot of things which can improve the efficiency of our work. For instance, we just take 2 hours to read a novel which can take us around the world, however, we might have to take more than a week or more to experience the thing we have read.

 Another reason can be seen to everyone is that book is systematic and well organized. Book can help people get the knowledge scientifically, which means we could learn things more easily than experience. Take the history book as an example, we could know large amount of historical events through reading books, like the Boston Tea Event which we could not know from what we have experienced.

  What is more, compare to experience, book is more inexpensive and easy to get. In other words we can go to a shop near my house and pay just a few money to buy books. But experience is usually more complicated can difficult to obtain. One good examples is the cars’ magazines hold by the people around the world, which gives us numerous type of useful information, just cost a few dollars. It can provide us some information or experience about driving cars. Because of the high price of hiring a car, most people choose to buy magazines and have a look, which I think is more cheaper and easier than experience. .

Form the reason above you might got the idea that books are more important than experience. So, it is sagacious to support the statement that book is the better choice. Not only with it low price but also the well organized details.