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发表于 2007-7-31 20:34:00 | 只看该作者

作文求改,德克版主帮帮忙,谢谢!

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Movies and televisions make more negative effects than positive effects on young people’s behavior.

 

 

Movies and televisions are the most fashioned entertainments in the society, which have appealed not only adults but also young people. They make us relaxed from the stress work of an entire day and bring us a tremendous amount of knowledge. Simultaneously, movies and televisions bring about negative effects on the young people’s behaviors. From my perspective, the positive effects that movies and televisions make outweigh the negatives ones.

 

 

The television programs, say, Animal World, Discovery, are all beneficial to our study. The vivid images attract us to learn more knowledge about the science and humanity. Frequently, we might gain a great deal of knowledge out of the textbooks. My favorite TV program is Animal World that I watch every week. Last semester, in my mid-term exam of the science appeared a formidable problem which says how the elder monkeys protect the younger monkeys when they run into an attack. I remembered the books did not describe the information about that. Fortunately, the TV program called Animal World depicts the situation and I caught that the day before that day to the moment. I was so joyous that I love the TV program more. After a couple of days, I know I got the highest score in the exam. And I shared my experience with my classmates, that is, the Animal World helped me.

 

 

In addition, cartoons in the movies and televisions also play a crucial part in our daily life. I have watched a multitude of cartoons from my childhood to now. Every story teaches me a lesson. The cartoon named the black cat policeman is my favorite. It describes a gallant black cat policeman are warm-hearted and it invariably defeats its enemies to rescue other cats successfully. The story tells me that at anytime it is a optimal thing to help people around us from trouble. The figure of the courageous black cat impresses me so deeply. At the real life, I enjoy to help my friends to solve the difficulties they encounter. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, movies and televisions will generate a great many benefits.

 

 

Though, movies and TV program, occasionally, create some negative effects on the young people’s behaviors such as violence. However, the young generation has their discretions and they will choose the good ones for themselves.

 

 

In conclusion, movies and televisions are playing a vital role in the all respects of our life. They create plentiful positive effects on the young people’s conducts.


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