请斑竹及个位大侠帮我改改作文.（之前的题目被我搞错了，请斑竹和个位大侠重看。真不好意思）

蕾咪 · 发表于 2007-7-23 10:36:00

之前的题目错了，应该是WET29.Some people believe taht the Earth is harmed bu human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.What is your opinion?

The truth is human activities improve the quantity of people's live, the transport become more and more advance and the product that made in factories make our lives more comfortable. But the environment around us damage very seriously because of these activities, many things have destroyed buy us.

The air pollution is the one of the problem should be solve. In the city I can feel the air is not so clean, the factory pour polluting chemical waste into the air and it is not good for our health. People are easier to get some illness like cancer than ever before. Also the air pollution is cause the acid rain in my city, it hurt the tree and the building.

The weather of my city also influence by people’s activities. When I was a child the weather in the summer is not so hot like today. We do not need the air condition in the day life owing to the cool wind. But today, the temperature in the city increase too high and I cannot live without air condition. Not in my city but in all of world the greenhouse gases lead to the global warming, the ice in the two poles is melting in this claim and it will destroy human lives.

Forest in our world is decrease so fast. People in today need so many woods to build our city or to produce some subjects like papers, so forest in many places is disappear in they life. Just like my hometown's hill, many of them were green when I was young but now too many of them are destroyed by people. Because of this, many animals in the forest also disappear, some of them are dead and others move to other place.

Therefore, I believe human activity has caused serious problem while it improve the world in which we live. And we should solve them.

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德克的猪 · 发表于 2007-7-23 11:58:00

题目问的是：在工业，农业，房地唱用地和动物领地之间，你觉得哪一个更应该得到保护

而不是让你说我们的星球是不是被污染了

你写偏题了。

重写吧。

请斑竹及个位大侠帮我改改作文.（之前的题目被我搞错了，请斑竹和个位大侠重看。真不好意思）

请斑竹及个位大侠帮我改改作文.（之前的题目被我搞错了，请斑竹和个位大侠重看。真不好意思）

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