114. From the bark of the paper birch tree the Menomini crafted a canoe about twenty feet long and two feet wide, with small ribs and rails of cedar, which could carry four persons or eight hundred pounds of <baggage so light> that a person could easily portage it around impeding rapids. (E) baggage yet was so light yet 前没有逗号 184. As measured by the Commerce Department, corporate profits peaked in the fourth quarter of 1988 <and have slipped since then, as many companies have been unable to pass on higher costs.> (D) but, many companies unable to pass on higher costs, they have slipped since then (E) yet are slipping since then, because many companies were unable to pass on higher costs In D, the intrusion of the awkward many... costs causes the antecedent of they to become unclear. Furthermore, a comma should precede the but since it introduces a second independent clause. In E, yet also requires a comma before it, are slipping with since then is illogical, and were unable represents an ungrammatical tense shift.
为什么这里的yet 前要加逗号? |