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TOPIC:

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Response:

Nowadays,as the commerce and science advances all over the world, preparation for our food is more easier than before,and I think that this has greatly improved people’ life and brings many convience to us.The reasons why I think so go as follow.

First,we can prepare our food quickly using many advanced equipments.For example,I buy a microwave oven last year. It helps me much. I can prepare my breadfast in ten minutes.This is very important because in nowadays people’ time are all urgent,these advanced equipment which are bought by the science can save our time efficiently.

Second,as the commerce are so developed,we can buy all foods in one place, instead of going here and there to buy various foods like before.As far as I am concerned, there is a very big supermarket in the vicinity of my home, there I can buy fish,vegetable, fruit,meat,polk,beef,and even sea food,i.e. So I think these convience to prepare foods did improve our life in nowadays.

Third,there are some instant foods on the market, including ruddle,rice,i.e.If your are a very busy people,you can buy these instant foods to prepare for your lunch or dinner.It is integral food,you don’t need to cook them ,what you need to do is just to put them in the microwave oven for a few minutes, and then you can enjoy your food.Isn’t is very convient?

All in a word,these days, the preparation of the food has become more and more easier. This bring us many conviences and did greatly improve our life.

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