It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
It seems that building a new high school in my community might increase the quality of the education and make our child attend school conveniently. On the other hand, the factory built here might decrease the living quality as well. Consequently according to my personality and fondness, I consider that I contradict that to build a new high school near my neighborhood. There are some reasons as following.
First of all, the most essential reason that strengthens this issue is that pollution and noise caused by the workers who builds the factory will make my family sick. Also, the big tracks will make our community danger. Take my parents for example. Because they are all aged persons, I am afraid that my parents might suffer from either the accident or the pollution. Moreover, my brother has suffered from a serious allergy. If there is serious air pollution, it really causes my brother much more serious
Furthermore, the second point that can develop my position is that the heavy traffic. In order to illustrate that, I take the school near our house for example. New senior high school was built three years ago. Before three years, our community is quite and peace. On the contrary, during the morning and dawn, the traffic is too heavy so that the ways near the school are always full of cars. Although the school really increases the education of quality, the annoyed traffic really drive our family crazy.
On the contrary, others people who consider that might increase the quality of the education and make our child attend school conveniently are good for them. In spite of the point which attracts me as well, I strongly believe that the demerits of building school here carry more weight than that of disadvantage of not building. Therefore most salient conclusion is obvious.
To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine
to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely
arrive at the conclusion that I contradict that to build a new high school near my neighborhood because of heavy traffic and noise and air pollution.