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prep-52谢谢大家 下周就考了~

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楼主
发表于 2008-10-25 12:12:00 | 只看该作者

prep-52谢谢大家 下周就考了~

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African cave paintings.

 

(A) Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting

(B) Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting

(C) Leakey was a contributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of

(D) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of

(E) Leakey's contributions to archaeology include discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of

 

想请教一下各位
                
这道题能用类似于逻辑主语的方法排掉ABC吗?因为前句是除了在。。。方面她的功绩外,她的贡献还有。。。

这样可以吗??

想请教一下各位
        
这道题能用类似于逻辑主语的方法排掉ABC吗?因为前句是除了在。。。方面她的功绩外,她的贡献还有。。。

这样可以吗??

沙发
发表于 2009-3-12 18:51:00 | 只看该作者

这个我有这个疑惑,请高手解答下~!就是说前后意思也得平行吧?说的必须都是同一个范畴,前面的her work 也是属于她的contributions,两个必须是同一类东西,是不是这样???

要是把B后面的and前后的改为平行的,就是把后面改为跟D一样的,B是不是还是不对?

谢~~~


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板凳
发表于 2009-3-12 19:17:00 | 只看该作者

可以的。

A,介词短语,分词,形容词词组位于句首时,其逻辑主语等于句子主语。
介词短语如:in contrast to,(contrary to 例外),as well as, besides,(un)like,
分词:doing sth/v-ed,或前面加介词的分词短语:by doing…, in addition to doing …,等等
形容词短语:如Reluctant to do sth, sb…..

摘自:

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=23&ID=5041

以下为两道OG 10 例题:

19. In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice is higher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essential to the human diet.

(A)  the protein in rice is higher quality than that in

(B)  rice has protein of higher quality than that in

(C)  the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in

(D)  rice protein is higher in quality than it is in

(E)  rice has a protein higher in quality than

In this sentence, the initial clause modifies the nearest noun, identifying it as the thing being compared with wheat.
                            By making protein the noun modified, choices A, C, and D illogically compare wheat with protein and claim that the protein in rice has more protein than wheat does. In C and D, the comparative structure higher in quality than it is in wheat absurdly suggests that rice protein contains wheat. B, the best choice, logically compares wheat to rice by placing the noun rice immediately after the initial clause. B also uses that to refer to protein in making the comparison between the proteins of rice and wheat. Choice E needs either that in or does after wheat to make a complete and logical comparison.

241.
                                As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the solar wind.

241.
                As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the solar wind.

(A)  As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream

(B)  Besides heat and light, also the Sun is the source of a continuous stream

(C)  Besides heat and light, the Sun is also the source of a continuous streaming

(D)  The Sun is the source not only of heat and
                light, but also of a continuous stream

(E)  The Sun is the source of not only heat and
                light but, as well, of a continuous streaming

Choice D, the best answer, has no modification errors and uses parallel phrases to complete the idiomatic construction not only ... but also.
                Choices A, B, and C have modification errors: As well as heat and light and Besides heat and light cannot logically modify the Sun, the nearest noun, as grammar requires them to do. This misdirected modification suggests that heat and light are also (in addition to the Sun) a source of the solar wind. Choice B may be faulted for the awkward word order of also the Sun, while C unnecessarily uses streaming rather than the more straightforward stream. Choice E fails to use parallel phrases in the idiomatic construction not only x ... but [also] y: of should not appear before not only if it appears after but, and but also is preferable to but. Finally, the use of the gerund streaming rather than the more straightfor­ward noun stream is needlessly awkward.

82. In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.

(A)  processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B)  processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(C)  the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining

(D)  small mills, by processing steel scrap into a
                    specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain

(E)  small mills, by processing steel scrap into a
                    specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained

The logical comparison here is between large steel plants and small mills. Choices A, B, and C illogically contrast large steel plants with [the] processing [of] steel scrap. Further, in choices B and C remaining is not parallel with put; conse­quently, it is not clear exactly what is remaining economically viable. The contrast between large plants and small mills is logically phrased in choices D and E, but remained in E is not parallel with put. Choice D, the best answer, uses parallel verb forms to complete the construction have been able to put... and remain.

注意:Unless不用

141. Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same, all patients receiving hearts or other organs must take antirejection drugs for the rest of their lives.

(A)  Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same

(B)  Besides transplants involving identical twins
                        with the same genetic endowment

(C)  Unless the transplant involves identical twins
                        who have the same genetic endowment

(D)  Aside from a transplant between identical twins with the same genetic endowment

(E)  Other than transplants between identical twins,
                        whose genetic endowment is the same

In A and B, the phrases beginning Unlike... and Besides... modify patients, the subject of the main clause; thus A absurdly states that Unlike transplants ..., patients... must take ... drugs, and B that all patients except for transplants... must take ... drugs. In B and D the expression identical twins with the same genetic endowment wrongly suggests that only some identical twin pairs are genetically identical. In E, the construction Other than transplants..., all patients ... must take... drugs illogically suggests, as in B, that some patients are transplants. Choice C, the best answer, solves these problems by using a clause introduced by Unless to describe the exception to the rule and a nonrestrictive clause beginning with who to describe the characteristic attributed to all identical twins.

希望可以帮到你 :)

地板
发表于 2009-3-12 23:38:00 | 只看该作者

对楼上的回答有一点疑议,你举出的几个例子都存在着比较关系,但在PREP52中没有比较的意味,只有并列的意思,例如你的第一例子

19. In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice is higher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essential to the human diet.
   

(A)  the protein in rice is higher quality than that in
   

(B)  rice has protein of higher quality than that in
   

(C)  the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in
   

(D)  rice protein is higher in quality than it is in

(E)  rice has a protein higher in quality than

In this sentence, the initial clause modifies the nearest noun, identifying it as the thing being compared with wheat.
    By making protein the noun modified, choices A, C, and D illogically compare wheat with protein and claim that the protein in rice has more protein than wheat does. In C and D, the comparative structure higher in quality than it is in wheat absurdly suggests that rice protein contains wheat. B, the best choice, logically compares wheat to rice by placing the noun rice immediately after the initial clause. B also uses that to refer to protein in making the comparison between the proteins of rice and wheat. Choice E needs either that in or does after wheat to make a complete and logical comparison.

此题必须保持逻辑一致不是因为in addition,而是因为有一个more protein than wheat does。你举的其他几个例子也都是有一定的逻辑对比关系,或者和主语并列的关系(as well as)。但in addition to不受此限制,可以与整句产生联系,而不只是主语,例如下句,

In addition to all this,there was nothing missing from the room.


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5#
发表于 2009-3-12 23:58:00 | 只看该作者
不可以。
A B C不好在 parrallelism没做好,in addition to 不要求逻辑主语一致(不是in addition to doing)。
6#
发表于 2009-3-13 10:37:00 | 只看该作者
感觉会有歧义吧,不知道in addition to的对象和后面句子的哪部分并列
7#
发表于 2009-3-13 13:35:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用balabaladou7在2009-3-12 19:17:00的发言:

可以的。

A,介词短语,分词,形容词词组位于句首时,其逻辑主语等于句子主语。
介词短语如:in contrast to,(contrary to 例外),as well as, besides,(un)like,
分词:doing sth/v-ed,或前面加介词的分词短语:by doing…, in addition to doing …,等等
形容词短语:如Reluctant to do sth, sb…..

摘自:

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=23&ID=5041

以下为两道OG 10 例题:

19. In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice is higher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essential to the human diet.
                            

(A)  the protein in rice is higher quality than that in
                            

(B)  rice has protein of higher quality than that in
                            

(C)  the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in
                            

(D)  rice protein is higher in quality than it is in

(E)  rice has a protein higher in quality than

In this sentence, the initial clause modifies the nearest noun, identifying it as the thing being compared with wheat.
       By making protein the noun modified, choices A, C, and D illogically compare wheat with protein and claim that the protein in rice has more protein than wheat does. In C and D, the comparative structure higher in quality than it is in wheat absurdly suggests that rice protein contains wheat. B, the best choice, logically compares wheat to rice by placing the noun rice immediately after the initial clause. B also uses that to refer to protein in making the comparison between the proteins of rice and wheat. Choice E needs either that in or does after wheat to make a complete and logical comparison.

241.
        As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the solar wind.

                                

241.
    As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the solar wind.

                

(A)  As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream
                    

(B)  Besides heat and light, also the Sun is the source of a continuous stream
                    

(C)  Besides heat and light, the Sun is also the source of a continuous streaming

(D)  The Sun is the source not only of heat and
    light, but also of a continuous stream

(E)  The Sun is the source of not only heat and
    light but, as well, of a continuous streaming

                    

Choice D, the best answer, has no modification errors and uses parallel phrases to complete the idiomatic construction not only ... but also.
    Choices A, B, and C have modification errors: As well as heat and light and Besides heat and light cannot logically modify the Sun, the nearest noun, as grammar requires them to do. This misdirected modification suggests that heat and light are also (in addition to the Sun) a source of the solar wind. Choice B may be faulted for the awkward word order of also the Sun, while C unnecessarily uses streaming rather than the more straightforward stream. Choice E fails to use parallel phrases in the idiomatic construction not only x ... but [also] y: of should not appear before not only if it appears after but, and but also is preferable to but. Finally, the use of the gerund streaming rather than the more straightfor­ward noun stream is needlessly awkward.

82. In contrast to large steel plants that take iron ore through all the steps needed to produce several different kinds of steel, processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain economically viable.
                        

(A)  processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology and remain

(B)  processing steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining
                        

(C)  the processing of steel scrap into a specialized group of products has enabled small mills to put capital into new technology, remaining
                        

(D)  small mills, by processing steel scrap into a
     specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remain
                        

(E)  small mills, by processing steel scrap into a
     specialized group of products, have been able to put capital into new technology and remained
                        

The logical comparison here is between large steel plants and small mills. Choices A, B, and C illogically contrast large steel plants with [the] processing [of] steel scrap. Further, in choices B and C remaining is not parallel with put; conse­quently, it is not clear exactly what is remaining economically viable. The contrast between large plants and small mills is logically phrased in choices D and E, but remained in E is not parallel with put. Choice D, the best answer, uses parallel verb forms to complete the construction have been able to put... and remain.
                        

注意:Unless不用

141. Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same, all patients receiving hearts or other organs must take antirejection drugs for the rest of their lives.
                        

(A)  Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same
                        

(B)  Besides transplants involving identical twins
      with the same genetic endowment

(C)  Unless the transplant involves identical twins
      who have the same genetic endowment

(D)  Aside from a transplant between identical twins with the same genetic endowment

(E)  Other than transplants between identical twins,
      whose genetic endowment is the same

                        

In A and B, the phrases beginning Unlike... and Besides... modify patients, the subject of the main clause; thus A absurdly states that Unlike transplants ..., patients... must take ... drugs, and B that all patients except for transplants... must take ... drugs. In B and D the expression identical twins with the same genetic endowment wrongly suggests that only some identical twin pairs are genetically identical. In E, the construction Other than transplants..., all patients ... must take... drugs illogically suggests, as in B, that some patients are transplants. Choice C, the best answer, solves these problems by using a clause introduced by Unless to describe the exception to the rule and a nonrestrictive clause beginning with who to describe the characteristic attributed to all identical twins.

希望可以帮到你 :)

需要纠正一下。

这个题是不可以的。

in addition to+doing时,需要去主句找逻辑主语;

in addition to+doing时, 不需要,根据逻辑意思。

希望没有误导

8#
发表于 2009-3-13 13:58:00 | 只看该作者
hmm...從prep題可以看出, "in addition to something"沒有什麼邏輯主語, 因為不是動作也不是形容什麼東西
從OG10#19可以看出, "in addition to having something"要求邏輯主語, 因為有"having"...
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