GWD-21-27 求教+讨论

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

A.   to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs

B.    to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing

C.   is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs

D.   is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs

E.    is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

我选的B，定语从句和分词短语一起修饰camcorder

B. 不对， which 指代 the world. 怎么能 as along as a handhel computer

GWD 21-27

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.

A.     to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs 代词直待错; “, +and S V” 造成歧义,不知道和哪句并列

B.     to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing  (which,先行词错; v=ing 修饰主句主语,逻辑意思错)

C.     is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs 同A,B

D.     is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs 正确,清晰!

E.     is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing 同B

太好了，这题偶选的也是D,嘿嘿，那新版cd-22的答案是错的了！

B没有D好，原因如下：

1，in the world介词短语的位置，导致which定语从句首先就近修饰world;

2，weighing从语法角度可以理解为前面名词a handheld computer的定语，不合逻辑；也可以理解为现在分词做伴随状语，从句意分析伴随结果不合逻辑，伴随动作的话也不合理，因为前面的to be 是一种状态，后面的weighing是动作

相比较而言，B逻辑修饰关系清晰，而且句子简洁没有歧义

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