Wharton help, urgent!

我在考虑why wharton的问题，以下3点是我总结出来的一部分。但通过对wharton网站的研究，我不是很确定这3点的描述是否恰当，因此请wharton的学生和各位对wharton有研究的帮我看看。

非常感谢。

1. Wharton is strong in finance education. At the same time, Wharton’s first year core curriculum provides strong and systematic general management education. So in terms of the knowledge I can learn from MBA study, Wharton’s combination of finance and general management knowledge fits me well and is the most important reason for me to choose this program.

2. I can learn and practice leadership skills not only from classroom, such as the learning team experience, the ethics program, the communication program, but also beyond the classroom by joining student clubs activities.

3. In Wharton, I can join various international programs and meet classmates from 70 countries. I am especially interested in the Wharton International Volunteer Program (WIVP). I can do community service for developing countries like China while gaining international experience.

另外，我觉得wharton的community service也比较多而且有特色，但我不知道怎么来具体描述。

i don't think your answer is impressive.

point 1: whether wharton is good at finance or not is not related to you. you have to say your objective/career plan before mention wharton. in addition, what is finance here? it appears that you are not very clear what your exact interest is.

point 2: is it related to wharton? most schools can meet this requirement

point 3: wivp: is it an important reason that make you decide to apply for wharton? i don't think so.

i recommend you to do more research, and find out what you want, why wharton can help you (u need to say sth that only wharton can offer), and what you can contribute.