lz看一下孙远写作宝典里的提纲嘛 另外,这是我以前下载的某NN的issue outline 22. Clearly, government has a responsibility to support the arts. However, if that support is going to produce anything of value, government must place no restrictions on the art that is produced. Optional words: Government/ the authorities Art/artist Support/finance/ patronize/ loan/ sustain/ pledge Thesis sentence: The inevitable representation of human civilization, art must be count in the responsibilities that government carries. But support without restrictions will probably lead to fruitless. View1: government should support art Evidence: because arts have very important functions in our civilization. for example: Paintings arouse imagination Music heal broken heart and purify dirty minds View2: unselected supporting of arts will probably lead to fruitless Evidence: Some radical forms of arts go beyond the acceptance of the masses and contradict our social moral. for example: posters features blood and violence |