[求助]大全语法207题解

大全987中第207道题:

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Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a
late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses
including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including
communal eating and social facilities.

(A) including
child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating
and social facilities

(B) that included
child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal
eating and social facilities

(C) with
child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include
communal eating and social facilities

(D) that included
child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating
and social facilities（D）

(E) to include
child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating
and social facilities included

The function and meaning of the including… phrases are unclear in choice A: for example, it is hard to tell whether Gilman called for urban apartment houses that included childcare facilities or whether such facilities represent one variety of the urban apartment houses she wanted built. Choice B resolves the ambiguity concerning child-care facilities, but called for…houses to include… facilities is unidiomatic in B and C. Choice D is best. In E, to include is again faulty. This question is more difficult than the average.

说说我的想法。除去call for的平行，house后面加including地用法是一个大类，后面包含几个具体的例子。houses 和child-care facilities 的关系应该是facility是house里面的用具，也就是说是从属，一个拥有另一个的关系。这时候应该用with更好。A person with advanced knowledge.是一个很好的例子