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没联系过T的作文,刚写了一篇,欢迎大家来批斗

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楼主
发表于 2006-10-22 17:33:00 | 只看该作者

没联系过T的作文,刚写了一篇,欢迎大家来批斗

Should people have a careful plan while they are still young in order to have a good future? To some extend, I agree with the speaker's general assertion. However, the speaker unnecessarily extends this broad assertion to an irreversible extreme while overlooks certain compelling factors impacting this issue. In the other word, I agree with the speaker' assertion, however, in some cases, it is unnecessary that making a careful plan while people are young.

On the one hand, it is sagacious to admit that this statement although suffers from some obvious drawbacks, processes some merits primarily in some special cases in which the implicit rationale behind it accords with common sense and our everyday experience as human beings, hence is partially indisputable. For example, everyone should choose a career to work. Before it, people should have a serious preparation to gain the knowledge of some field that he or she wants to work in. It might be too late that an adult have no idea to do something as career when he or she is mature enough to work.

Though this example, It is clear that people should have a careful and serious plan about their career, while they are still young, because the preparing process is a long term, and a hard and tough work that needs people to plan it and prepare early.

On the other hand, recognizing that a more appropriate choice must incorporate aspects of issue as sufficient as possible, I have to point out my contention with speaker who, while overstating his assertion, ignores some paramount factors, at which thoughtless people causally take a fresh look. In short, this assertion is troubling in some aspects as well. We can take the hobbies as an example. Every one has its own hobby in the childhood. however, is it necessary that he or she should make a careful plan about development of its hobby, while he or she is still young? It is uncertain that one's recent hobby could become one's interested field in the future, when he or she is an adult. To make a plan early is not only a useless thing, but also a bad obstacle that prevent people to find what is the true interested field as his career. Hobby is just hobby, it can bring the pleasure and happiness to people without a careful plan. For another example, in some cases, the children are too young to make a reasonable decision, although they want to make. At this time, it might be too funny that someone suggests children to have a plan for their future.

In conclusion, issue of making a plan early for a good future is a complex one, requiring subjective judgment, consequently, there are on easy or certain answers. So different are the personal experience, and emotional concern among people with diverse culture that thousand individuals might process thousand opinions towards this issue. According to me, in the final analysis, a case by case study is certainly helping the people to make a decision that whether make a plan while they are still young for a food future.

 

THE MORE 大家提意见,THE MORE 我相当的感谢  呵呵

我用骑墙观点,不知道行不行

沙发
发表于 2006-10-23 03:29:00 | 只看该作者
对作文不太在行,觉得楼主的还不错,帮顶,欢迎大家点评。
板凳
发表于 2006-10-23 15:44:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得骑墙还是太混乱了,让人看着很费劲,没有侧重点。

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-24 12:36:00 | 只看该作者

恩  谢谢大家~

我GMAT的ISSUE大概就是这样的,4.5.

所以在琢磨T是不是也能这样写~~呵呵~~~~继续欢迎大家批斗~

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