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20.   Wynton and Branford Marsalis, brothers who have fused the complex rhythms of contemporary jazz with the rollicking musical legacy of their hometown, are fitting symbols of the New Orleans jazz revival.

(A) Wynton and Branford Marsalis, brothers who have fused the complex rhythms of contemporary jazz with the rollicking musical legacy of their hometown, are fitting symbols of the New Orleans jazz revival.

(B) Wynton and Branford Marsalis are brothers, have fused the complex rhythms of contemporary jazz with the rollicking musical legacy of their hometown, and are fitting symbols of the New Orleans jazz revival.

(C) The Marsalis brothers, Wynton and Branford, have fused the complex rhythms of contemporary jazz with the rollicking musical legacy of their hometown, which is a fitting symbol of the New Orleans jazz revival.

(D) Fusing the rhythms of contemporary jazz, which are complex, with the rollicking musical legacy of their hometown, Wynton and Branford Marsalis are a fitting symbol of the New Orleans jazz revival.（A）

(E) A fitting symbol of the New Orleans jazz revival are brothers Wynton and Branford Marsalis, who fuse the complex rhythms of contemporary jazz with the rollicking musical legacy of their hometown.

B 并列的三个句子间没有并列关系

C which定语从句的先行词错

D wordy, 分开了fuse…with造成with可能作后面的状语

E 主谓不一致

关于B的错误，是只因为三个并列意思上不好么？

B的并列是

are。。。have done。。。are doing

这样的并列的确有问题

是兄弟，干了件事 ，and 是象征

怪怪的，确实没什么并列的关系。

平行首先要考虑逻辑意思的平行，然后是结构

这个好象都不符合

谢谢两位