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刚写的twe,盼指导意见

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发表于 2006-4-7 09:05:00 | 只看该作者

刚写的twe,盼指导意见

题目:Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future?

It is a big issue for every people to enjoy their money once they earn it or save it for future. As far as I am concerned with it, the advantages of saving money to me are far beyond using it immediately after I get it.
What I shall say first is that I am not a person who has a smart sensitivity about wealth. People who gifted in this can earn a great fortune quickly by using their money in some special fields. Thinking about my own awareness in investments, no good profits will go without super lucks, and unwanted risks of losing wealth will exist habitually. Just saving money can help me avoid financial risks, such as losing money in investment or having debt when suffer in trouble, though it cannot benefit me as well as the financial investment or some other investments.
Another important reason is that an amount of accumulation can ensure me that I am living in safety and I have the ability to bear some risks. And that sense of security to take changes will enable me to be myself in working and living. Then more chances of attempting new ideas will be presented and more creative works will be available.
Something more than that is my salary is not good enough to get what I wanted in one time. Saving is necessary for me to get access with those favorite items. But during the process of saving money, logic thinking about setting goals, making and correcting plans with changes will be practiced exactly.
It is true that it is difficult for people to choose the right way for themselves in enjoying their income promptly or saving it for aftertime. Fortunately,  the way I have got is the right way for me in accordance with my ability and background.

感觉码字真的好难!
沙发
发表于 2006-4-8 00:54:00 | 只看该作者

a little bit too short


try to elaborate on your opinions..and give examples..such as your experiences..

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