大家帮忙看看我的RP ,不胜感激！！

After the completion of my undergraduate program in Computer Science and Technology, I changed my major to Enterprise Management, just because of my time-long great interest. In the course of pursuing the Bachelor in Computer, my

research activities cover a wide range of fields, including Advanced Mathematics、PASCAL Language、Data Structure、Discrete Mathematics、Applied Mathematics、Computing Method、Operating System and so on. Since I entered the East China Normal University, I have been spending hours reading many professional books and doing some research. Based on my research findings, I have published three research papers, and there are two papers to be published in 2006.

Nevertheless, I am acutely aware that, in the research fields I am interested in, there are still so many difficult subjects and challenges waiting for solution. In Enterprise Management, China is relatively backward in the fields of Organization Behavior and Management Information System. China lags relatively behind its Western counterparts. Basically, China relies on import for large-scale management theories. By contrast, the Hong Kong University has many world-leading academic specialists and encourages interdisciplinary programs. It will accord me a stimulating and liberal academic environment, apart from the sophisticated research facilities.

At Hong Kong University, I plan to learn broader-based foundational theories in my chosen fields. With my solid interdisciplinary knowledge and my ability for the quick assimilation of new knowledge, I intend to secure for myself a RA status to directly start my laboratory research under the guidance of my future advisor. I can also work as TA so that I can study while teaching and conducting my internship. I can apply, test and consolidate the theoretical knowledge that I acquire in the process of internship and degree program.

As an alumnus, I should be frank. I don't think it is a good personal statement. More precisely, the expression is "Chinese". Show it to a native English speaker and ask him for comment.

Well, because of the PS, my honey and I are having a "cold war".