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OG218---一个和省略无关的问题

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楼主
发表于 2005-10-14 00:12:00 | 只看该作者

OG218---一个和省略无关的问题

218. Despite protests from some waste-disposal compa­nies, state health officials have ordered the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be published.


(A)              the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches to be measured and that the results be


(B)              that seawater at popular beaches should be measured for their levels of bacteria, with the results being


(C)             the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results to be


(D)             seawater measured at popular beaches for levels of bacteria, with their results


(E)              that the levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches be measured and the results


In this sentence, English idiom requires one of two paradigms: x ordered y to be z‘ed or x ordered that y be z 'ed. Choice E, the best answer, employs the second of these paradigms. Choice A mixes the two paradigms (levels... to be measured and that the results be published), producing a sentence that lacks parallelism. C and D use neither paradigm and are thus unidiomatic. Also, in D, the pronoun their has no logical and grammatical antecedent. Choice B unidiomatically employs the verb should (not in either paradigm); also, the pronoun their does not agree in number with seawater, its most logical antecedent.



发现自己现在到了一个怪圈。比如说218,大家不理解的是BE动词的省略,而我不理解的是为什么OGC and D use neither paradigm and are thus unidiomatic?可以给解释一下吗?


OG也说了,有两个表达方式:x ordered y to be z’ed or x ordered that y be z’ed.答案C虽然表达是不对,但是为什么不可以把the meansure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results看作Y部分呢?


谢谢



沙发
发表于 2005-10-14 10:47:00 | 只看该作者

主要是和原文意思不符合


levels of bacteria 应该属于results的一部分


所以B中用with比较恰当,而不是平行的

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-15 10:27:00 | 只看该作者
还是不太清楚。
地板
发表于 2005-10-15 11:14:00 | 只看该作者

发现自己现在到了一个怪圈。比如说218,大家不理解的是BE动词的省略,而我不理解的是为什么OG说C and D use neither paradigm and are thus unidiomatic?可以给解释一下吗?


这里需要完整的看OG的解释


OG说In this sentence, English idiom requires one of two paradigms: x ordered y to be z‘ed or x ordered that y be z 'ed. Choice E, the best answer, employs the second of these paradigms. Choice A mixes the two paradigms (levels... to be measured and that the results be published), producing a sentence that lacks parallelism. C and D use neither paradigm and are thus unidiomatic.


关于order的习惯用法只有两种1.order to 2.order that,E为正确答案,用了第二种格式。A混合了2种格式,造成句子不平行,错误。C和D两种格式都没有使用,故不复合习惯用法。


OG也说了,有两个表达方式:x ordered y to be z’ed or x ordered that y be z’ed.答案C虽然表达是不对,但是为什么不可以把the meansure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results看作Y部分呢?


如果当作Y的部分还原到原句,就为:


state health officials have ordered the measure of levels of bacteria in seawater at popular beaches and the results be published.


把原文的the levels of bacteria… be measured and the results published 细菌水平测试&测试结果公布


改变为了the measure and results be published (标准&结果)公布


1.逻辑意思改变,一个实意动词就这样没有了


2.measure动词变成名词wordy


3.n. of n. of n.这种结构不好,OG专门有一题说过,容易引起歧义且冗余

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2005-10-15 20:23:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢new_land,讲的很清楚。


我对句子的意思把握还不是很好。估计和词汇量也有关系。

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