CR中的SC 求解！！！

Aurora.H · 发表于 2018-12-15 17:15:19

The events in the life of Prince Sviatov that the text describes occurred in 1165, and in the diagram of Sviatov's family that accompanies the text his father, who died in 1167, is identified as still living.

我的思路是第一個the events in the life.....,and in the diagram..... 兩個限定片語去修飾the events
第二個in the life of Prince Sviatov that the text describes occurred in 1165 想想問那個名詞子句的that是修飾the life嗎？還是修飾the events?
第三個in the diagram of Sviatov's family that accompanies the text his father, who died in 1167, is identified as still living. 想問那個形容詞子句的that應該是修diagram沒錯吧？
再者his father, who died in 1167, is identified as still living. 我的理解是他爸他爸爸死於1167年,被證實其實還活著（當下這樣翻完完全不知道該如何解那ＣＲ.. ..覺得跟論點碰不著邊際啊）還是他爸爸在1167年還活著,只是死於1167年（例如：前半年還活著之後才死了）想知道是哪裡出了問題求高人指點！

kluivert · 发表于 2018-12-15 17:57:45

The events(in the life of Prince Sviatov) {that the text describes }occurred in 1165, and in the diagram (of Sviatov's family ){that accompanies the text} his father[,who died in 1167,] is identified as still living

Aurora.H · 发表于 2018-12-16 17:08:24

還是不太懂

痴人也有梦 · 发表于 2018-12-17 09:55:04

The events occurred in 1165, and in the diagram his father is identified as still living

The events in the life of Prince Sviatov
The events that the text describes occurred in 1165The events occurred in 1165
, and in the diagram of Sviatov's family
diagram that accompanies the text
his father, who died in 1167
his father is identified as still living

Aurora.H · 发表于 2018-12-17 12:57:27

再打一次我的問題點好了

The events in the life of Prince Sviatov that the text describes occurred in 1165, and in the diagram of Sviatov's family that accompanies the text his father, who died in 1167, is identified as still living.

1.這一句是複合句(主詞分別為the events跟diagram) 還是兩個限定片語共同修飾the events ?

2.如果diagram是主詞我覺得很怪,他怎麼看都像片語啊

而且找不到動詞,所以我還是覺得他是片語修飾the events

痴人也有梦 · 发表于 2018-12-17 13:08:02

The events occurred in 1165, and his father is identified as still living in the diagram

这回清楚了吗？
其实这种犯了sc的大忌

in the diagram之所以放在句首就遵循了修饰成分一定要离被修饰成分尽量的近。放句末有歧义了

The events occurred in 1165, and （ in the diagram） his father is identified as still living
这样好些

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