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发表于 2022-8-26 17:05:32 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
At the end of 2001, motion picture industry representatives said that there were about a million copies of Hollywood movies available online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available.


(A) online and expected piracy to increase with high-speed Internet connections that become more widely available

(B) online and expect the increase of piracy with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections

(C) online, and they expect more piracy to increase with the wider availability of high-speed Internet connections

(D) online, and that they expected the increase of piracy as high-speed Internet connections would become more widely available

(E) online, and that they expected piracy to increase as high-speed Internet connections became more widely available

OA 是 E
想问为什么that 是必须的 said 和 expected 平行 是哪里有错误?


og解析
Every clause needs a subject, either an overt subject or an understood subject (whose
interpretation can come from a coordinated clause or some other nearby clause).
In this sentence, the clause containing expected lacks a clear subject.
The intended subject is motion picture industry representatives, but to clearly indicate that, the
subject should either be repeated or be replaced with the pronoun they. Furthermore, piracy to
increase with high-speed Internet connections that beconie more widely available is awkward, and it
fails to clearly communicate the idea that piracy will increase as a result of high-speed Internet
connections becoming available.



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