OG16 SC17 求助

SHJ877 · 发表于 2017-10-15 11:10:28

17. A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne’s fictional Phileas Fogg.
(A) A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included
(B) The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
(C) Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
(D) Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly’s exploits are
(E) The pioneer journalist’s exploits of Nellie Bly included

C The wording of this version is illogical because it makesNellie Bly the subject of the verb including
OG 说including是Nellie Bly的动词可是看MANHATTAN语法书里讲 Any -ing word functioning as part of the verb form will have another verb immediately before it, as in the is playing example. If no prior verb exists, then the -ing word is not acting as a verb.

感觉像是Noun modifer但是句意上又解释不通
刚开始准备GMAT 求NN解答

SHJ877 · 发表于 2017-10-16 08:30:21

[Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.] Use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized
这里的coordinating不应该是做adverbial modifier修饰前面的内容吗？为什么OG解析说会让使事件发生顺序混乱？求NN解答

SHJ877 · 发表于 2017-10-16 09:17:50

Unlike the nests of leaf cutters and most other ants, which are, situated underground or in pieces of wood, raider ants make a portable nest by entwining their long legs to form “curtains” of ants that hang from logs or boulders, providing protection for the queen and the colony larvae and pupae.

OG Also, the referent of the relative pronoun which is ambiguous, possibly modifying ants, and possibly modifying nests.
Manhattan 上说 Again, the relative pronoun which must refer to the main noun closest to the which.
如果这样的话指代的就应该是ants 为什么还会存在指代不清的情况呢

Fiona09 · 发表于 2017-10-16 11:53:31

具体解析请见：https://gmat.la/question/OG2016-SC-17

May97 · 发表于 2017-10-17 04:55:37

17.在原句中，a pioneer journalist是NB的同位语，强调的应该是include，C就改变了原意。

May97 · 发表于 2017-10-17 05:04:55

121 in her book illustration, 前后有两个逗号，都是属于它的，它就是一个插入语，在句中不做任何成分。所以V-ing修饰的是BP。
cooperate&capitalize有先后顺序，有先后顺序的词用并列形式表达

May97 · 发表于 2017-10-17 05:07:53

the nests of leaf cutters and most other ants
A of B，在of结构中，that&which应该要修饰A

danyuchn · 发表于 2017-10-17 17:21:31

其實應該是在語義上錯誤地修飾了pioneer journalist。

[SC悬赏令] OG16 SC17 求助

OG16 -121

所属分类: 下线版块

正在浏览此版块的会员 ()