OG Verbal分册 SC原题求助！

小字符 · 发表于 2017-8-4 15:00:54

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Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and
vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians,
including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

这句话的考点应该是简洁和主谓一致。但是正确答案本身好像是病句呀。这句话从whose开始就是一个很长的定语从句？导致这个Bill Monroe没有谓语动词呀？
求大神指点！

小字符 · 发表于 2017-8-4 15:40:52

不好意思，忘记打年份了 2017版的OG

maplesida · 发表于 2017-8-4 16:19:47

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and
vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians,
including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

influenced 是 whose 从句的谓语, Bill Monroe 的谓语动词是 inspired

小字符 · 发表于 2017-8-4 16:27:43

maplesida 发表于 2017-8-4 16:19
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and
vocal style inf ...

感谢！我也这么想过，可是感觉这个also很突兀呀。有可能是从文章里直接截取的？缺少了上下文。
如果想要使inspired和influenced并列，是不是应该去掉逗号：
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and
vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists and also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

这样这句话就是病句了？

maplesida · 发表于 2017-8-13 12:07:25

inspired 不与 influenced 并列。主句子是 Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe also inspired many musicians ....

, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and
vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, 这整段是插入句

also inspired 可以呼应插入句中的 influenced

后知后觉的Chris · 发表于 2017-8-14 23:15:11

好像楼上比较有道理。。

emmahiggins09 · 发表于 2017-8-15 06:43:27

这句话这里的 comma also 的用法是 oxford comma

楼主可以参见CNN 报道过的一则法律条文中没有使用oxford comma 和使用过后的情况

http://forum.chasedream.com/foru ... ight=oxford%2Bcomma

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