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The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.

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with型独立主格一个问题,求助牛牛确认

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发表于 2010-3-24 12:03:21 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
46.    (26975-!-item-!-188;#058&003041)

The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.

(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow
(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow
(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow

考点:主谓一致(Agreement)   有效用词(Diction)
1) 动词能用单词本身表示名词形式的,就不要用the + -ing形式来表达名词形式
2) as的用法:as + n表示作为… , as + 主语+谓语表示动作之间进行比较
3) with的用法:
with型独立主格,与主句形成紧密的逻辑联系,形式为:
  with + n. + -ed/ing形式; with + n. + adj.; with + n. + 介词短语 作状语修饰前一个分句的动作类型词 例:Visitors to the park have often looked into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline. with引导的独立主格作状语就近修饰sleeping

(A) 正确,两个动词returns和contributes都与主语一致,并列用两个并列的句子清晰的表现了降水回归自然的两种途径.
(B) 主谓不一致,the remainder应该用单数谓语形式,contribute应该改为contributes; flow本身就是名词形式,不需要用the flowing来表现名词形式.
(C) 主谓不一致,return应该改为returns,同时contribute应该改为contributes; the flowing应该改为the flow.
(D) 介词with后面不能跟不定式to do,并且将两个并列成分改变为主从成分,从而改变了原句的意思.
(E) as使用有误,句子本意并不是对两个动作进行比较,而是称述两个事实;主谓不一致:return和contribute均要改为单数形式.


这道题中,关于D的解释,我怎么感觉不对啊,请牛牛能帮助一下,我记得新东方的讲座中说过,WITH独立主格之后可以加动词不定式?

谢谢
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沙发
发表于 2010-3-24 13:39:29 | 只看该作者
我不知道能不能接不定式,但是你可以这么理解
从原句看,分号后的主句是 transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere  while引导从句
而你说的D选项,明显用the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow充当了主句,违背了原句的意思。
板凳
发表于 2011-4-2 10:04:46 | 只看该作者
46.    (26975-!-item-!-188;#058&003041)

The continental United States receives an average of 30 inches of precipitation a year; transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow of streams and rivers.

(A) transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, while the balance of 9 inches contributes to the flow
(B) even though transpiration from soil and from plants returns approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the remainder of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(C) although transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the balance of 9 inches contribute to the flowing
(D) with transpiration from soil and from plants to return approximately 21 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contributes to the flow
(E) as transpiration from soil and from plants return approximately 21 of the 30 inches to the atmosphere, the rest of the 9 inches contribute to the flow

考点:主谓一致(Agreement)   有效用词(Diction)
1) 动词能用单词本身表示名词形式的,就不要用the + -ing形式来表达名词形式
2) as的用法:as + n表示作为… , as + 主语+谓语表示动作之间进行比较
3) with的用法:
with型独立主格,与主句形成紧密的逻辑联系,形式为:
  with + n. + -ed/ing形式; with + n. + adj.; with + n. + 介词短语 作状语修饰前一个分句的动作类型词 例:Visitors to the park have often looked into the leafy canopy and seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks on a clothesline. with引导的独立主格作状语就近修饰sleeping

(A) 正确,两个动词returns和contributes都与主语一致,并列用两个并列的句子清晰的表现了降水回归自然的两种途径.
(B) 主谓不一致,the remainder应该用单数谓语形式,contribute应该改为contributes; flow本身就是名词形式,不需要用the flowing来表现名词形式.
(C) 主谓不一致,return应该改为returns,同时contribute应该改为contributes; the flowing应该改为the flow.
(D) 介词with后面不能跟不定式to do,并且将两个并列成分改变为主从成分,从而改变了原句的意思.
(E) as使用有误,句子本意并不是对两个动作进行比较,而是称述两个事实;主谓不一致:return和contribute均要改为单数形式.


这道题中,关于D的解释,我怎么感觉不对啊,请牛牛能帮助一下,我记得新东方的讲座中说过,WITH独立主格之后可以加动词不定式?

谢谢
-- by 会员 daisy401 (2010/3/24 12:03:21)



对呀,对呀,我也觉得D的解释,不对,错在这个地方用独立主格是因为to do表示将要的含义,修饰后面的flow,有些不对

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地板
发表于 2011-6-8 17:23:12 | 只看该作者
although 和 even though表达的意思有没有偏离原意呢?  有让步在里面么?
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发表于 2013-1-7 15:38:42 | 只看该作者
A选项中的while的使用是不是又歧义呢?while是不是也有可能表示对比,谢谢。
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发表于 2013-1-8 08:59:20 | 只看该作者
while有兩個意思:although vs. at the same time as

我覺得這裡表示at the same time as,句中沒有明顯的contrasting意思,不表示although吧~

另,貌似很少見到官題里用到有幾個意思的某個conj~然後是錯在conj理解有歧義~
我覺得gmat要考的是看我們能不能從conj眾多意思中,根據給出句子的meaning和grammar選出合理的那個意思吧~
^^個人看法啦~~
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发表于 2013-1-8 09:28:33 | 只看该作者
解释错误,with 独立主格结构主要作状语,完全可以用with+ 名词+不定式的形式。只是这里的to return 跟在 plants后面有修饰plants的嫌疑。这不是真正的错误。真正的错误在于 with 独立主格结构在这里是原因状语,和后面的句子形成了因果关系,而原句是并列关系,所以D选项完全改变了原来的意思。
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发表于 2013-1-8 09:33:36 | 只看该作者
A选项中的while的使用是不是又歧义呢?while是不是也有可能表示对比,谢谢。
-- by 会员 云游 (2013/1/7 15:38:42)


这里while完全没有歧义,在句子形式上while多数时候都表示并列,也有时候表示转折。即使有对比的意思也是句子里隐含的对比,不在形式上用while来表达。
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发表于 2017-1-26 12:12:24 | 只看该作者
补充d选项from Ron
"E.g., The studio has released three movies featuring the XXX character, with at least three more to come.
"With ... to ___" usually describes anticipated events, as it does in this example. So, in this context, it doesn't make sense; both parts should be described in the present."

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