［求助］曼哈顿语法中关于修饰语的一个问题

MosenBanana · 发表于 2015-12-13 12:44:26

第六条讲解修饰语的时候有三个例句：
Wrong: George Carlin, both shocking and entertaining audiences across the nation. who also struggled publicly with drug abuse, influenced and in- spired a generation of comedians.
Better: Both shocking and entertaining audiences across the nation. George Car- lin. who also struggled publicly with drug abuse, influenced and inspired a generation of comedians.
BEST: Both shocking and entertaining audiences across the nation, George Carlin influenced and inspired a generation of comedians.

它给的最佳答案是去掉了一个从句，可是这样句意不就不完整了吗？为什么这样是最佳呢。
求大神指点，实在搞不懂GMAT的最佳。

［求助］曼哈顿语法中关于修饰语的一个问题

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