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Some students want to attend a University in their home country, while others desire to study abroad. As far as I am concerned, My preference is studying abroad. There are no less than three advantages in studying abroad as rendered below:

First of all, studying in a foreign University you could have a better academic surrounding, which is more important for master or doctor studying. For instance, one of my friends are studying in an American University for his doctor degree, and I still remember that he told me that he could achieve more than three satisfying papers there ,while maybe only one in domestic Universities.

Moreover, the facilities in foreign Universities are comparably better than those of domestic Universities, which is very important in the course of your studying. For example, my current tutor studies the theory of Elastohydrodynamic Lubrication, but most of his experiments must be done abroad for there are no good facilities in domestic Universities.

Finally, not the last verification is that when you are in a foreign country, there is a totally new environment that is different from the home country in front of you, so you can make friends with people of a different literature, which could do good to your development.

Of course, choosing to attend a university in home country also has advantages to some extent, such as you can go home from time to time, you have lots of friends around you, and so on.

Studying abroad, on the other hand, has its own disadvantages, an example of which is that you must waste much time to adapt yourself to the new environment and so on. Contemplate all the above things, I just support the opinion of studying abroad is a better way of get education.   

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