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The voluminous personal papers of Thomas Alva Edison reveal that his inventions typically sprang to life not in a flash of inspiration but evolved slowly from previous works.

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OG-22 关于平行结构中的主语省略?

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楼主
发表于 2005-6-29 11:14:00 | 只看该作者

OG-22 关于平行结构中的主语省略?

22.   The voluminous personal papers of Thomas Alva Edison reveal that his inventions typically sprang to life not in a flash of inspiration but evolved slowly from previous works.


(A) sprang to life not in a flash of inspiration but evolved slowly


(B) sprang to life not in a flash of inspiration but were slowly evolved


(C) did not spring to life in a flash of inspiration but evolved slowly


(D) did not spring to life in a flash of inspiration but had slowly evolvedC


(E) did not spring to life in a flash of inspiration but they were slowly evolved


C, the best choice, places not and but in such a way that the distinction between springing to life in a flash of inspiration and evolving slowly is logically and idiomatically expressed. A and B are faulty because, for grammatical parallelism, not in a flash... must be followed by but in..., not by a conjugated form of the verb. Moreover, were slowly evolved is incorrect in B because evolve, in this sense of the word, cannot be made passive. Choices C, D, and E all correctly place not before spring. D, however, contains inconsistent verb tenses; E contains the faulty passive and an intrusive they.


我想问问OG解释的最后一句是一个通用的原则吗? 是不是同一主语的两个动作并列,如sb do A and sb do B,中的后一个sb必需省略呢?


沙发
发表于 2005-6-29 11:58:00 | 只看该作者
如果and前面没有逗号, 必须省略, 否则run-on.
板凳
发表于 2005-6-29 12:08:00 | 只看该作者

同一主语用SVO and SVO是属于run-on的错误,OG中即有反例。


另外类似的句子结构一般有(and可以换成其它意思的连词比如yet/but):



同一主语的两个句子:







SVO and VO —> OG4/65/184 两个谓语动词联系紧密,一般有较强的时间连续性或因果关系







SVO yet VO —>which could carry ..yet was so light

SVO,and SVO —> OG97/129/135/184 谓语时态不一致(说的是两件不同的事)













不同主语的两个句子:








SVO,and SVO —> OG179B(两个独立的句子)








SVO and SVO —>一般是错误的,特殊情况:正确用法OG207,更象短语的并列对比











































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地板
发表于 2005-6-29 12:12:00 | 只看该作者
OG207不算例外, 该分句是由because引出的, and后面省略了because, 我说的Run-on的错误范围是在主句的情况下.
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-6-29 12:24:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Avantasia在2005-6-29 11:58:00的发言:
如果and前面没有逗号, 必须省略, 否则run-on.

OG22,也是在从句中哦(that引导的宾语从句),那是不是SVO and SVO就不算是run-on呢?



[此贴子已经被作者于2005-6-29 12:38:08编辑过]
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发表于 2005-6-29 12:31:00 | 只看该作者
从句中是允许的, 但是在主句中肯定不允许.
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-6-29 12:37:00 | 只看该作者

那为什么OG22解释的最后一句说they的加入是错误呢? 是不是像Ring说的,因为 SVO and SVO 中如果两个主语是同样的,那无论在从句还是主句中,第二个主语必须要省略。能不能这样理解呢?请版主指点

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发表于 2005-6-29 23:41:00 | 只看该作者
记得OG中这种反例是有的,只是一下子找不着。
9#
发表于 2005-6-30 00:02:00 | 只看该作者
就我目前的总结而言, SVO and SVO, 在主句中后面的S必须省略, 否则Run-on; 从句中一般会把第二个S前面的关联词省略(例如because, that...), 所以是可以的.
10#
发表于 2005-7-24 16:12:00 | 只看该作者
主语加两个动作,如果两个动作有同一主语,则两个动作并列,不能在第二个动作之前重复主语,而E选项的they在此处显然属于多余.
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