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楼主
发表于 2003-10-27 18:35:00 | 只看该作者

og 258

258. The British sociologist and activist Barbara Wootton once noted as a humorous example of income maldistribution that the elephant that gave rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo was earning annually exactly what she then earned as director of adult education for London.

(A)that the elephant that gave rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo was earning
(C)that there was an elephant giving rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo, and it earned

c为什么错?


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沙发
发表于 2003-10-27 23:12:00 | 只看该作者
that 从句修饰 example, 从句中说的是: elephant was earning what she earned
板凳
发表于 2003-12-10 20:41:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用hedgeforfun在2003-10-27 23:12:00的发言:
that 从句修饰 example, 从句中说的是: elephant was earning what she earned


抱歉,没看懂.您指的是A还是C??能不能再详细说说


地板
发表于 2003-12-10 21:19:00 | 只看该作者
并列:sb do what sb do
there was

she earned
不能满足并列
5#
发表于 2004-1-12 19:58:00 | 只看该作者
我认为C选项使得句子重心偏移!或者说改变了原句意思吧!
6#
发表于 2004-5-29 05:43:00 | 只看该作者

能问一下句子重心怎样改变的吗?

还有og的解释:Choice C may be faulted for distortion of meaning and diminished clarity because it suggests that the point of Wootton's example was the elephant's very existence; comparative earnings are presented (after and) as incidental detail  什么意思吖?

请指教,谢谢

7#
发表于 2004-5-31 05:54:00 | 只看该作者
up !请指教
8#
发表于 2004-5-31 08:35:00 | 只看该作者

我把句子简化一下你或许就懂OG的意思:

2The British sociologist and activist Barbara Wootton once noted as a humorous example of income maldistribution that the elephant that gave rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo was earning annually exactly what she then earned as director of adult education for London.

(A)that the elephant (that gave rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo) was earning
(C)that there was an elephant (giving rides to children at the Whipsnade Zoo), and it earned

OG所要讲的是英国社会学家所举的例子不是大象的存在(there is the elephant), 而应该是拿大象赚的跟她所赚的一样

9#
发表于 2004-6-2 03:57:00 | 只看该作者
明白了,谢谢狗狗教诲
10#
发表于 2004-7-31 20:48:00 | 只看该作者

用排除错误的方法已经明白了bcde的错误,但是总觉得a里面


the elephant.. was earning..what she then earned ...


这里一个用过去进行,一个过去时,感觉也不太符合平行的规则啊??


还有请问 (B) that the elephant, giving rides to children ...


和(A)里的that从句比, giving不好在哪里???

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