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794.        The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month.

(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month

(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival’s month

(C) world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month

(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival（C）

(E) world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival

A 错只因为被动吗？

B错只因为proclaiming 动作发出者不是OG吗?

C when是怎么回事？

请达人讲讲，先谢了！

This sentence depends on using the
correct conjunction to join two independent clauses. In that is a conjunction that means inasmuch as; because in that has largely gone out of use, it
is considered stilted and overly formal. It also uses two words when one would
do. In this sentence, the second clause explains the first one, so the
conjunction for; meaning because, is
the most appropriate choice for joining the tow independent clauses of the
compound sentence.

A. In that is stilted and overly
formal

B. It is not clear who would be
doing the proclaiming; a clause is preferable to a phase here

C. They is ambiguous, possibly
referring to either the states or the
Games

D. Correct. In this sentence, the
conjunction for joins the two clauses
correctly and economically

E Wordy and awkward construction

受教了.   thanks!

非常感谢!

C 的when也是错的吧？