OG12一道语法题求问?
[size=10.000000pt]Rising inventories, when unaccompaniedcorrespondingly by increases in sales, can leadto production cutbacks that would hampereconomic growth.
(A) when unaccompanied correspondingly byincreases in sales, can lead
(B) when not accompanied by correspondingincreases in sales, possibly leads
(C) when they were unaccompanied bycorresponding sales increases, can lead
(D) if not accompanied by correspondinglyincreased sales, possibly leads
(E) if not accompanied by corresponding increasesin sales, can lead
Diction; Agreement
The modifying phrase when ... sales is needlesslydiðcult to understand. The adverb correspondingly is incorrectly and ambiguously used; using theadjective corresponding to modify increases in salesmakes the intended meaning clearer. Unaccompaniedis not wrong but not accompanied more effectivelyexpresses the intended negation.
另外还有一题
39. In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to Queen Catherine annulled so as to marry Anne Boleyn.
(A) so as to marry
(B) and so could be married to
(C) to be married to
(D) so that he could marry
(E) in order that he would marry
看C答案
C the infinitive here should be preceded by a conjunction (in order); to marry is preferable to the wordier to be married to.
请问这里一定要in order 引导么
换个角度会不会好一点?
A:unaccompanied < not accompanied;correspondingly 只能修饰unaccompanied,意思明显重复了
B:possibly改变句子意思;leads 主谓不一致
C:unaccompanied < not accompanied;were改变句子时态;increases in sth.
D: orrespondingly 只能修饰unaccompanied,意思明显重复了;possibly改变句子意思;leads 主谓不一致
E: not accompanied--正确,corresponding increases --修饰正确,increases in sth --语法正确, can lead主谓一致且没改变原句意思 --正确
Vanyazhao 发表于 2015-4-16 22:12
另外还有一题
39. In 1527 King Henry VIII sought to have his marriage to Queen Catherine annulled so ...
第39题很坏,有个很妖的点在这里
1. to 不一定要用in order 引导,这个是无疑的
2. 这里你想到用to 说明你知道是表达目的的意思,而且你知道是 King Henry 要marry Anne Boleyn。但是,(in order) to 必须直接或者非常靠近主语才行,否则会有歧义,尤其是在主语和(in order )to之间还多了个Queen Catherine。而在表达目的状语的时候,so that不但没有改变意思,而且可以帮助明确主语,使得读句子的人可以毫不费力的定位marry的主语是King Henry。因此,D要优于C。
SC考得是更好的句子,不是正确就可以的。。。