prep2中的一题，“介词+名词+V-ing”结构

葵connie · 发表于 2014-7-10 17:37:32

As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.

A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C. The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D. The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E. The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes

在曼哈顿上搜了解答是这样的：

first off, the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN. (that isn't usually the case, so, if you're in doubt, you should strike choices with this sort of construction.)

for instance:
i've never heard of bees stinging dogs
WRONG. this is not an issue of whether you've heard of bees themselves; it's an issue of whether you've heard of their stinging dogs.

...results in the act of stinging causing...
WRONG. this doesn't result in the act of stinging itself; it results in what is caused by the act of stinging.

i have a picture of my cousin playing hockey.
CORRECT. this time, the picture is actually of my cousin, so we're good.

therefore, (a) and (d) are wrong because of "...results in the act of stinging causing...".

不是很理解【名词+介词+名词+V-ing】错误的情况（上面的粗体部分）
the construction (preposition) + NOUN + VERBing is WRONG, unless the preposition refers directly to the NOUN

refers directly to the NOUN 到底是什么意思？是本质属性吗？

DUKB24 · 发表于 2014-7-10 22:30:44

I like swimming because of strengthening my body（×）
你想强调的是strengthen这个动词，而不是body这个名词

所以应该改成 → I like swimming because it strengthens my body

DUKB24 · 发表于 2014-7-10 22:30:57

I like swimming because of strengthening my body（×）
你想强调的是strengthen这个动词，而不是body这个名词

所以应该改成 → I like swimming because it strengthens my body

葵connie · 发表于 2014-7-11 11:24:54

DUKB24 发表于 2014-7-10 22:30
I like swimming because of strengthening my body（×）
你想强调的是strengthen这个动词，而不是body这 ...

谢谢斑竹！！

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