Both shocking and enteraining audiences across the nation, George Carlin, who also struggled publicly with drug abuse, influenced and inspired a generation of comedians.
书上说这句话stylisticaly awkward，改成了：
Both shocking and enteraining audiences across the nation，George Carlin influenced and inspired a generation of comedians， even as he struggled publicly with drug abuse.
为什么后一句就比前一句好？求高手解答~
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