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请教prep190及OG13 48 关于while、though、although的省略用法

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发表于 2013-3-26 02:29:41 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B. some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C. some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D. with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter

prep上的一道题,答案选A没问题。

我纠结的E选项的解释。语法笔记中说:while多余,因为后面的others as religious havens中没有谓语动词,while必须省略(如果有谓语动词则不能省,如Some cleaned the windows,while others mopped the floor. )这里while不能用于省略形式吗?比如像although一样的省略?比如这个句子对不对:While sad,I ate a lot.  另外英汉词典上有这么一个例句: I waited in the car while idling the engine. 这里while不就是用了省略形式吗?

请问,是语法笔记错了吗?

在看下面这道OG13上的语法题。
OG13   48
48. It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers more than four
times the surface area of its closest rival in size, North America’s Lake Superior.


(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(C) Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is actually the largest lake on Earth, covering
(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers
(E) Despite being called a sea, the largest lake on Earth is actually the landlocked Caspian, covering
这里为什么though后面的省略形式中,表示被动的BE动词被省掉了?
因为语法笔记中说although的省略形式要求:1.谓语动词是be(不表被动)2.逻辑助于是主句主语。
那么就是说though省略和although的省略规则不一样?




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沙发
发表于 2013-3-26 07:11:57 | 只看该作者
1)把E植入句子的话是:The thirteen original British colonies in North America, with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
2)第一个加粗的部分当作同位语,第二个加粗部分为独立主格,接下来红色的部分,与前面没有关系了。而且如果是while省略了动词的话,就应该是和each had中的had动词相同的。这么一下来,句子意思全变了,而且加粗的两个部分在句中完全没用处了。
3)语法笔记之所以写while多余,我认为是因为while的出现,把应该做同位语的成分变成了从句。改变了句意,即不能与前面的some formed as commercial ventures的殖民地特点平行。
板凳
发表于 2013-3-26 07:18:25 | 只看该作者
关于OG13的省略,我觉得规则是这样的
状语从句中的谓语省略的一定是be动词,即状语从句省略可看为省略了主语和be动词,且同留同省
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-26 09:01:18 | 只看该作者
rylstar01 发表于 2013-3-26 07:18
关于OG13的省略,我觉得规则是这样的
状语从句中的谓语省略的一定是be动词,即状语从句省略可看为省略了主 ...

谢谢你的回答哦!
我还是不太明白,那表示被动的be动词也可以省略的吗?
5#
发表于 2013-3-26 09:08:28 | 只看该作者
取决于逻辑主语是否清晰吧,在清晰无歧义的情况下,我觉得GMAT是豁了命的玩省略。
像trench那道题,trenchs that were cut是对的,trench cut也是对的,最后选了简洁这个。(貌似扯远了- -)
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-26 12:27:20 | 只看该作者
rylstar01 发表于 2013-3-26 09:08
取决于逻辑主语是否清晰吧,在清晰无歧义的情况下,我觉得GMAT是豁了命的玩省略。
像trench那道题,trenchs ...

恩!这类就算是错误,也是有效性错误。总归还有其他更明显的错误。不纠结了!
7#
发表于 2013-6-8 15:50:57 | 只看该作者
while只有名词和连词俩属性 连词不能直接跟名词 记得ron也这么讲过。。。
8#
发表于 2015-8-4 01:36:20 | 只看该作者
with some formed as commercial ventures and others religious havens
则何如?
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