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楼主
发表于 2009-2-18 16:01:00 | 只看该作者

[讨论]大全418

1.        In the textbook publishing business, the second quarter is historically weak, because revenues are low and marketing expenses are high as companies prepare for the coming school year.DA as的用法·

(A) low and marketing expenses are high as companies prepare

(B) low and their marketing expenses are high as they prepare

(C) low with higher marketing expenses in preparation

(D) low, while marketing expenses are higher to prepareA

(E) low, while their marketing expenses are higher in preparation

问题:D哪错了?

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2009-2-18 16:02:00 | 只看该作者
板凳
发表于 2009-2-18 16:34:00 | 只看该作者

while表示对比,
            marketing expenses are high as companies prepare for the coming school year, 这里表达的应该是原因,

因为公司准备下一个学年,所以marketing的花销高。

revenues are low and marketing expenses are high 是并列来说明前面weak的原因。

地板
发表于 2009-2-19 06:57:00 | 只看该作者
好像没有理由用比较级higher
5#
发表于 2010-7-2 20:49:38 | 只看该作者
改错的原则之一就是不能使句子中心发生改变,原句介绍 第二个季度营收少的原因 是2个并列的成分,而D中,while的引入使得第二个原因成了从句,所以错
6#
发表于 2013-7-20 17:44:53 | 只看该作者
很好奇那个著名的 并列句 逗号法则为什么在这里失效了呢?
7#
发表于 2014-11-24 04:28:21 | 只看该作者
In the context of the sentence, the two clauses -- revenues are low and marketing expenses are high -- play the same role:
Both indicate why the second quarter is historically weak, and both occur as companies prepare for the coming year.
Since no contrast is intended, and seems more appropriate than while
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