千行Excel Q95

PMFTOTC · 发表于 2013-10-15 19:22:01

The peaks of a mountain range,  acting like rocks in a streambed, produce ripples in the air flowing over them; the resulting flow pattern, with crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that  forms them is moving rapidly, are known as  "standing waves."

(A) crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms  them is moving rapidly, are
(B) crests and troughs that remain stationary although they are formed by  rapidly moving air, are
(C) crests and  troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving  rapidly, is
(D) stationary crests and troughs although the air that forms them is  moving rapidly, are
(E) stationary crests and troughs although they are formed by rapidly  moving air, is

答案说E The subordinate clause in the passive voice following although is awkward and unclear.
怎么就 awkward 了？
我觉得C 好awkward呀用 stationary 就能修饰的它却用了个从句。
求高人指点！

PMFTOTC · 发表于 2013-10-15 20:10:08

Help ！！！

PMFTOTC · 发表于 2013-10-16 01:52:28

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PMFTOTC · 发表于 2013-10-16 13:45:18

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PMFTOTC · 发表于 2013-10-16 21:47:34

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zhudanqing · 发表于 2013-10-25 01:51:04

We want to contrast "stationary" with "rapidly moving air", (e) doesn't present that contrast clearly.
我觉得这个解析很清楚了~

好像千行看下来之后有一个感觉，从简洁、主动优于被动等这些标准去判断的时候风险挺大的。

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