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An incidence cannot logically exceed women. In the construction X exceed> Y, the subject X and the ob ject Y must be parallel. To fix the problem, you can repeat the noun incidence or use the pronoun that. In any case, you must repeat the preposition among
Right: The incidence of the disease among men EXCEEDS the incidence among women.
Right: The incidence of the disease among men EXCEEDS its incidence among women. (这里的its 指代什么?)
Right: The incidence of the disease among men EXCEEDS that among women
这里的 its 是指代 the disease 吗?
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