请问黄金第10提作文的思路

kevinjpcn · 发表于 2013-7-13 11:31:25

这道题用七宗罪好像套不上去，比较麻烦啊。
请问怎么办

Thefollowing appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper.

“This past winter, 200 students from Waymarsh State College traveledto the state capitol building to protest against proposed cuts in funding forvarious state college programs. The other 12,000 Waymarsh students evidentlyweren’t so concerned about their education: they either stayed on campus orleft for winter break. Since the group who did not protest is far morenumerous, it is more representative of the state’s college students than arethe protesters. Therefore the state legislature need not heed the appeals ofthe protesting students.”

kevinjpcn · 发表于 2013-7-13 11:38:50

这个题目范文也才300多点字，很难啊

The conclusion in this argument is that the state legislature need not consider the views of protesting students. To support this conclusion, the author points out that only 200 of the 12,000 students traveled to the state capitol to voice their concerns about proposed cuts in college programs. Since the remaining students did not take part in this protest, the author concludes they are not interested in this issue. The reasoning in this argument is flawed for two reasons.
First, the author assumes that because only one-tenth of the students took part in the protest, these students’ views are unrepresentative of the entire student body. This assumption is unwarranted. If it turns out, for example, that the protesting students were randomly selected from the entire student body, their views would reflect the views of the entire college. Without information regarding the way in which the protesting students were selected, it is presumptuous to conclude that their opinions fail to reflect the opinions of their colleagues.
Second, the author cites the fact that the remaining 12,000 students stayed on campus or left for winter break as evidence that they are not concerned about their education. One obvious rejoinder to this line of reasoning is that the students who did not participate did so with the knowledge that their concerns would be expressed by the protesting students. In any case, the author has failed to demonstrate a logical connection between the students’ alleged lack of concern and the fact that they either stayed on campus or left for winter break. Without this connection, the conclusion reached by the author that the remaining 12,000 students are not concerned about their education is unacceptable.
As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the author would have to demonstrate that the protesting students had some characteristic in common that biases their views, thereby nullifying their protest as representative of the entire college.

rixianglanren · 发表于 2013-7-16 08:52:53

正文第一段，还是样本不足这个攻击点，只是论证成：作者推断这个样本不足，但并没有证据证明
正文第二段，攻击结论无据，论证是：作者假设其他12000的学生不去抗议是因为不担心或者不关心该事件，但事实上完全可能有别的原因导致他们这么做。

这是从范文推测的，希望能帮到你

kevinjpcn · 发表于 2013-7-16 10:07:58

谢谢 rixianglanren

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