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发表于 2012-6-28 10:44:01 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

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Though they might be viewed as a form of deprivation, little more than a joint a day for regular users could have the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence that is engaged in by soda drinkers.

A. Though they might be viewed as a form of deprivation, little more than a joint a day for regular users could have the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence that is engaged in by soda drinkers.
B. As for regular users, little more than a joint a day may be viewed as a form of deprivation but leading soda drinkers engaged in the same kind of compensatory.
C. Though regular users may view little more than a joint a day as a form of deprivation, the deprivation itself can lead the soda drinkers to engage in the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence.
D. Little more than a joint a day for regular users, though, might be viewed as a form of deprivation, which could lead to the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence engaged in by soda drinkers.
E. Little more than a joint a day for regular users, though, may be viewed a form of deprivation, leading the soda drinkers to be engaged in the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence.

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沙发
发表于 2012-6-28 10:44:14 | 只看该作者

Answer explanation:

Agreement; Grammatical Construction; Idiom; Rhetorical Construction

这个原句的意思是,尽管这被看成了一种形式的剥削,但是每天只吸一根多一点点的大麻可能会有产生同种的,补偿性的,以及那些喝苏打水的人所拥有的过度沉溺。 仔细观察会发现,其实这两个半句并不能形成转折。虽然XXX是剥削,但是XXX能产生同种的一种沉溺。前后两者其实说的是一种类型的事情。

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A. They指代有误,“little more than a joint a day”不能用复数指代;前后两个半句不能形成转折;that be 放在句中多余,可以删去。

B. “As for regular users”修饰位置不好,在这个位置相当于修饰整个句子;but后面是一个Fragment,but后句中没有谓语(动词)。

C. 这个句子语法上没有问题,但是和A同样,前后两个半句见转折(让步)没法形成。这个句子可以翻译为:“尽管一般人可能会把一天吸一根多一点点的大麻看成一种形式的剥削,但是这种剥削自己也会让喝苏打水的人进入一种同种的补偿性的过度沉溺之中”。后半句说的是这种剥削的“作用”,由此可见,用修饰比较好。

D. 正确。which修饰“a form of deprivation”,这里的“a form of deprivation”是高度集合的一个词(就像bus station, traffic light); “though”这里不做连词存在,而是一个“插入语”,做修饰成分,连在一起的意思是“ 就算是比一天吸一根大麻多一点点”;这里句中不存在in和by连用的问题,两者是分开的,engaged in///// by soda drinker。

E. leading表示伴随,显然后半句并非前半句的结果;view后面需要接as;to be engaged表达有误。

板凳
发表于 2012-6-28 14:20:03 | 只看该作者
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D
首先,A原文的致命伤是Though they ....中they指代的是后面little more than a joint a day。指代不清先撇去不说,被指带的对象是单数。(correctness )
其次that is engaged in 这个表达繁琐,可写成past participle. (conciseness)


而BCE的选项都改动了句子原意
the original logic link


little more than a joint a day -> viewed as a deprivation -> lead to the compensatory over-indulgence


而这个overindulgence是与soda drinker的症状相同,而不是joint引起了soda drinker的症状


D项:虽然把though从conjunction转成了adverb,但是语义没有大的改动。只有它可选了。


这一题虽然可以用结构法排除A,但是在没看懂的情况下很难排除E。
最大的难点是,joint到底是什么东西?请查词典: joingt : A marijuana cigarette。没有这个意思,很难解释这句话。
事实上原题将难度人为地提升了,没有上下文,而且去了尾巴。


当然以上是新手的见解,还没刷过OG等等。求勿喷


relude, Verdana, san-serif">Little more than a joint a day for regular users, though, might be viewed as a form of deprivation, which could lead to the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence engaged in by soda drinkers who expect their daily due.
http://blogs.scientificamerican.com/talking-back/2012/06/23/16-ounce-cokes-and-40-joints-a-month-when-government-dictates-to-consumers/
地板
发表于 2012-6-28 16:13:52 | 只看该作者
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D
首先,A原文的致命伤是Though they ....中they指代的是后面little more than a joint a day。指代不清先撇去不说,被指带的对象是单数。(correctness )
其次that is engaged in 这个表达繁琐,可写成past participle. (conciseness)


而BCE的选项都改动了句子原意
the original logic link


little more than a joint a day -> viewed as a deprivation -> lead to the compensatory over-indulgence


而这个overindulgence是与soda drinker的症状相同,而不是joint引起了soda drinker的症状


D项:虽然把though从conjunction转成了adverb,但是语义没有大的改动。只有它可选了。


这一题虽然可以用结构法排除A,但是在没看懂的情况下很难排除E。
最大的难点是,joint到底是什么东西?请查词典: joingt : A marijuana cigarette。没有这个意思,很难解释这句话。
事实上原题将难度人为地提升了,没有上下文,而且去了尾巴。


当然以上是新手的见解,还没刷过OG等等。求勿喷


relude, Verdana, san-serif">Little more than a joint a day for regular users, though, might be viewed as a form of deprivation, which could lead to the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence engaged in by soda drinkers who expect their daily due.
http://blogs.scientificamerican.com/talking-back/2012/06/23/16-ounce-cokes-and-40-joints-a-month-when-government-dictates-to-consumers/
-- by 会员 HerringtonD (2012/6/28 14:20:03)



排除E最简单啊,view as嘛。。。不是吗
5#
发表于 2012-6-28 16:19:36 | 只看该作者
咱以为是少打了一个as呢……如果只看后面的话会不方便
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发表于 2012-6-28 16:23:09 | 只看该作者
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C

DE都是把lead部分改为修饰deprivation,没有转折的意思了
B把lead部分变成名词和deprivation有转折关系
A把句子改为定从修饰compensatory。另外觉得they不是很妥
7#
发表于 2012-6-28 18:14:07 | 只看该作者
这回的题目可是有些难度的题目哦~~大家加油啦~~~~~~

helr
8#
发表于 2012-6-29 01:29:04 | 只看该作者
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选D
理由:A) they 不知所指。。句子里面唯一的复数是 regular users,可是这里they显然不是指代users的。
B) might 变成 may,改变语气了,;后半部分“but leading soda drinkers engaged in the same kind of compensatory”  不通..本人水平实在有限。。不知道怎么改
c)might 变成 may,改变语气。;Though..., the deprivation...完全改变句子意思了,本来说的是“little more than a joint a day”这件事,和the deprivation怎么怎么样,不相干
e)might 变成 may;改变语气, view 应该是 view as; leading。。。修饰view。。说不通
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发表于 2012-6-29 01:51:31 | 只看该作者
这回的题目可是有些难度的题目哦~~大家加油啦~~~~~~

helr
-- by 会员 glhelr (2012/6/28 18:14:07)



围观helr老师
顺便打个酱油~~下次测试题目选项神马的别忘了我噢
10#
发表于 2012-6-29 04:49:39 | 只看该作者

最大的难点是,joint到底是什么东西?请查词典: joingt : A marijuana cigarette。没有这个意思,很难解释这句话。
relude, Verdana, san-serif">Little more than a joint a day for regular users, though, might be viewed as a form of deprivation, which could lead to the same kind of compensatory over-indulgence engaged in by soda drinkers who expect their daily due.
http://blogs.scientificamerican.com/talking-back/2012/06/23/16-ounce-cokes-and-40-joints-a-month-when-government-dictates-to-consumers/
-- by 会员 HerringtonD (2012/6/28 14:20:03)


joint者weed也,大麻也。。哈哈
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