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发表于 2013-4-28 15:43:35 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
5月底的托福考试出分了,这贴也得做个小结。咯。。。。事实证明,懒人就是没救,仅仅练了一篇而已。结果是综合fair独立good,总分21. 综合的听力部分很差,独立这次特别在字数达到540(以前都是300多400出头),可能字数的增加会有点好处。继续努力吧!

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语法很糟糕,复习到现在还是一塌糊涂,不好意思互改作文(看不出错来)。平时也不练,起码有一年没动手指头了。唉,眼下又是临时抱佛脚的要考试,这次不能不写了。希望每天都能坚持写一篇。主要是保证自己能想的到的词和句都写的对。其实每天复习看到听到的句子不少,也有心想用起来,但不练怎么可能会用呢,所以要练要练要练!一楼就当目录吧,每天来坛子里看大家积极的写自己也会被鼓励的。加油加油!


4月28   Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should spend more money on improving facilities (eg. labs and general equipment) than on hiring famous professors.

4月29 今天做了一套TPO太烂,整TPO去了没有背作文,这样很不好,以后要注意。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-4-29 13:25:07 | 只看该作者
4月28日
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should spend more money on improving facilities  than on hiring famous professors.
(eg. labs and general equipment)

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As for the importance between facilities of University and professors, I do not think the facilities are greater important
than professors. So I think University should spend more money on hiring famous professores than on improving
facilities.Nowadays, a wise mind is the most expensive issue in the morden knowledge world. The talent humman
sources are the unstopped adventure which can push the development on the further for University and even the
society. That is, if a University spend more on famous professor, they will gain a more high quanlity students, nice
research issues and abundant support funding which is wonderful for University.

Every University want to make himself powerful, and the students, as we know, are the core power of the University.
The quility of the students devide the level of the University, and the good students are educated by responsible and
wise professors. If the University like to spend more on employing famous professors, it will get more excellent
students. Moreover, the excellent students will make good influence in their working position and then attract more
other students source to apply the University. So, the famous professors' advantage is obviously. For example, in my
local University, the business apartment have some famous professor in Accountiing, so their Accounting students are
welcome to some big four company. So many high school students who want to take Accounting career will primily
think this University as their dream school.

On the other way,  a University also need good research issue in vary academic apartment especially in the research
University. A famous professors not only infulence their students to reach the high level but also put themselves to the
further research achivements. When a partment have some famous professors, it will form a nice research
environment which can lead the whole aparment researches to develop. For example, I know one University invited a
famous professor as leader. The famous professor was so excellent that he applied an abundant funding for their
research courses. Obviously, base on the implying funding and the power leader, they have a good condition to make
their researches.

As a result, combinding the above advantages of excellent students and good researches, a University can make their famous
in the society. Of course, these issues also respond the support funding to the University, and then the University can spend
these money to hire more famous professors to improving their qualities. That is the nice cycology for a educational instistitions.
We know some excellent Universities for instance Yellow, Hawwad and MIT which recevied considerable support funding form
their successful students and excellent research issues. They continute to cycle these money to improving their educational
condition and culture more successful students and researches.

Above all, we can clearly find the advantage of spending more money on famous professors. In that way, we can get more
excellent students who can attract other students source, estabilish a nice research environment for improving more
successful researches and make more supported funding form the society. All of them is vital important for an University.
I know somebody say the general equipment is also important. Well, the equipment is just necessary but not more
important than the humman source. So you can see many University trend to spend more money on attract famous professors.
板凳
发表于 2013-5-13 16:28:17 | 只看该作者
公主我也回来考托福了, 消失了半年,准备gmat缓考了,啊啊啊啊,好没出息啊!!!
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2013-5-17 03:29:20 | 只看该作者
abbyseven 发表于 2013-5-13 16:28
公主我也回来考托福了, 消失了半年,准备gmat缓考了,啊啊啊啊,好没出息啊!!! ...

哇,好久不见你,巨想你!
你才不是没出息呢~~~ 英语要慢慢来,你已经很努力了~ 我没有你努力呢很惭愧的·
啥时候开始托福复习?一起一起,真高兴再一起前进!
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发表于 2013-5-17 23:53:22 | 只看该作者
童颜公主 发表于 2013-5-17 03:29
哇,好久不见你,巨想你!
你才不是没出息呢~~~ 英语要慢慢来,你已经很努力了~ 我没有你努力呢很惭 ...

我6.15考 这几天又酱油了 哭~ 呜呜呜 互相监督
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-6-6 07:24:05 | 只看该作者
abbyseven 发表于 2013-5-17 23:53
我6.15考 这几天又酱油了 哭~ 呜呜呜 互相监督

加油加油,快解放了~
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