不是NN,说下自己的观点。:)请指正;个人最后倾向A
A,helps sb. do(help sb. do)结构,感觉好怪,犹豫
B,so,增加了为两个句子增加了因果关系(感觉不是硬伤);
C,that you, as directors of the company, can help...是对it的指代;也就是说that you can help... is my hope in writing this letter.
但是you ,as directors of ...的话,感觉曲解了you directors of the company的意思。也犹豫
D,You的在句中的成分不清晰
E,that you can help....成分is hopeful to me;感觉不对
这么一说的话,C,我就不纠结那个you ,as directors of the company了
转换思维
那么A的话,you dierctors of the company help the company..应该属于awkward吧
如果按A形式改的话,I hope this letter help you directors of the company rectify the situation and avoid...这样比较清晰些